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Smokies Cascade

by Steve Gettle

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 21, 2017279 views9 comments
Here is a little cascade along The Roaring Fork. I was attracted to the way the shape of the Violets mimicked the shape of the tiny falls. Depth of field was the real challenge here. The flowers are only about 8-10 inches in front of the lens. I actually bracketed my focus point to ensure I got it all. Could have focus stacked but I try to avoid the computer as much as possible.

Nikon D4S, 17-35 @ 17mm, 4 seconds @ f22, ISO 200

Comments

9 comments
Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on January 21, 2017 at 7:51 PM
I like this intimate scene very much, especially the violets. I am not a big fan of water as smoke, but to each his own.laugh
Registered on July 24, 2006, 2741 Posts, 12349 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on January 21, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Very nice, Steve!  The foreground works well in this scene and compliments the cascades nicely.  I could wish for a faster shutter speed to retain more detail and texture in the water, but understand this was a compromise to get the optimal DOF, although with the D4s you have plenty of room to bump up the ISO if you were so inclined.

I haven't made it to the Roaring Fork area.  I need to get out there sometime to explore.
Registered on May 28, 2004, 114 Posts, 2890 Comments
Comment posted by Genny K. on January 22, 2017 at 2:12 AM
I like having the flowers in the FG. It's not something you see very often, and I think it really adds to the image here.  Those little violets are gorgeous. Good job of getting it all in focus!
Good exposure on the scene, too. It might have been interesting to see what a different shutter speed would have done, but this is sweet.
 
Registered on June 5, 2006, 132 Posts, 2001 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 22, 2017 at 1:49 PM
Steve,

You've crafted an intimate and lovely little scene.  I like the perspective giving emphasis to the foreground and delicate little plant, while including the broader view and cascades in the bg.  Looks like you handled the dof quite well; looks sharp front to back.

Not a nit really, but often times there are tiny things that can make good images even better.  While the exposure is pretty spot on, I might want to brush/paint down the exposure level a tad in the foreground rock/moss. That might bring out more color, without having to play with saturation.  Also, very minor, but you might consider cropping (slicing) just a tad off the bottom - say striking through the middle of your name watermark.  also, you have some room to crop in from left to remove the brighter moss-covered rock creeping in on the left edge.  Even perhaps burning that down would help; it's a slight eye magnet for me.

Otherwise, this is just a beautifully crafted image.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on January 22, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Sweet image, Steve.  Very nicely done.  I think Lon has some good suggestions about subtle tweaks to make it even better. Beautiful work.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on January 22, 2017 at 4:44 PM
I like the repeating arcs in your composition. 2 possible suggestions. 1) crop from up top just below the trees thus making that bg even less important. 2) I would experiment with making the yellowish greens a tad more cyan just to see how that looks. 
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Hoveijn on January 23, 2017 at 4:18 PM
Great find to have the violets and the falls counterpoint each other. I agree with the suggestions above. Although I am not a fan of milky water, I really like this image.
Registered on November 2, 2015, 18 Posts, 192 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on January 23, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Beautiful summer view of these cascades.  I do like the comp.  You may get overall sharper images if you focus stacked just 2 images at f16 instead of f22.  I think It would be minimal computer time for this type of image and maybe better sharpness due to diffraction at f22.  I guess it just depends on how big you might want to enlarge/ print the image down the road.  I also think that the color balance might be a little too yellow or warm.  May be worth playing around with.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Leggett on January 23, 2017 at 10:52 PM
This is a fine comp, Steve.  Roaring Fork is a favorite destination of mine.  I see what you mean about the mimic, and a good low angle to get you up close and personal with the scene.  I tend to agree that a bit more detail in the water would make a stronger presentation.
Registered on July 21, 2004, 706 Posts, 3233 Comments