Nature Photographers Network
This is the preserved archive of the original Nature Photographers Network. The community continues at naturephotographers.network.
High Desert Weave
‹ PreviousLandscape GalleryNext ›

High Desert Weave

by Dave Dillemuth

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 26, 20173,719 views16 comments
This is a bit different from what I normally shoot. I was attracted to the isolated colors and textures of this winter ground cover in the Owens Valley. Comments, critiques appreciated.

Comments

16 comments
Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on January 26, 2017 at 10:37 PM
I like this, Dave.  The different layers and textures have my eyes exploring the whole frame.  The subtle color palette has an inviting richness as well.  Nicely done!
Registered on May 28, 2004, 114 Posts, 2890 Comments
Comment posted by Ryan Shain on January 26, 2017 at 10:42 PM
Hi Dave,

I love the colors and details in this image. The Owens valley has such wonderful colors and tones. This area's foliage works so well together in the dance of photography. The colors of magenta, purple ,red , brown, yellow,, blue, grey, and green are all represented in this fine image. It is a fine study in color, tone, and form.

If I had a suggestion, it would to crop from the bottom up. I think right above the first green bush on the left really works for me.

Love this as is too Dave
Registered on February 20, 2007, 226 Posts, 4571 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on January 26, 2017 at 11:22 PM
Gorgeous stuff here, Dave. The large version showcases all those wonderful details in the layers of assorted colors in the brush. The way you filled the frame lets me wander and savor the scene before me. I could also see this working with just a bit of a crop from the top; just down far enough to get rid of those red soil areas on the top edge of the frame. Just a thought because this is a beauty as is.

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on January 27, 2017 at 2:48 AM
Marvelous colours, details, layers, and detail in the large version. The largest red, bare area near the top right draaws my eye a bit, so you might consider cropping a little lower, or cloning over it. 
Really sweet image!  devil

Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on January 27, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Real nice layers of colors and textures. I might back off the green saturation a bit, but then my tastes usually run to a little less saturation. You continue to post excellent work from the east side. Keep them coming, very enjoyable.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on January 27, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Beautiful mix of textures and colors.  This would make a great puzzle!  What is not to like in this, fine job isolating the complex scene.  The cropping decision is always the most difficult with a scene like this, especially what we know is behind (from your other posts).  I like your crop here.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on January 27, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Beautiful, Dave. Terriific combination of color, pattern, and textures. No nits from me. devil
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on January 27, 2017 at 11:32 AM
Dave: The larger version MUST be viewed to really appreciate this shot. With the original smaller version I thought the FG was soft but the larger version dispels that notion. Love the color palette and overall comp. Well seen and superbly captured. >=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Mattia Oliviero on January 27, 2017 at 1:02 PM
This is great, Dave.Different colors compared to your previous image but the same good composition to enhance all those gorgeous layers. 

Mattia
Registered on August 24, 2016, 43 Posts, 254 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on January 27, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Excellent image, IMO. This has an impressionistic painterly look. A Monet. The beautiful layers overlap each other with a vague dream-like quality. The Orton(?) effect works beautifully here. The yellow grasses break up the image nicely and add interest. The sage in the llc anchors it well. Just a well composed image. I wouldn't change a thing.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 29, 2017 at 1:28 PM
Dave,

What a pleasing combination of colors, all arranged in nice layers.  I would agree with the comment about cropping slightly from the bottom; this would help giving equal weight to the layers.

Beautiful.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on January 29, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Dave, This is lovely and the larger version is very cool to look at. The colors and textures are wonderful across the whole scene. The only thing I might do would be the small crop mentioned of the top to just below the darker brown spots. Really nice work!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on January 29, 2017 at 10:31 PM
Sorry I missed this Dave.  Most excellent.  There have been some good suggestions thus far, so I'll add mine.  I would add a vignette, subtle of course, and feathered from the center.  This doesn't need a thing, but play with that.  Really, really good.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on February 5, 2017 at 12:36 AM
Congrats on a fine WP! 
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on February 5, 2017 at 1:33 AM
Congrats on a fine win. I thought there were a couple of other good ones but this was the most creative.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on February 5, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Congrats on WP, Dave.  Excellent image and very well deserved.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments