Yet Another Tree
by Bo Chen
This is a 30 second long exposure in the twilight 30 or 40 minutes after sunset. I feel that the naked eyes could not see these delicate colors, unless the image is taken by a camera.
Do you like the composition, colors, and mood? Do you like the twigs of this tree? What can be improved if I return to this place?
Thanks,
Bo
Comments
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I'd have to try and "black" or touch out the stuff on the right, sort of blend it into the blackness, but that's just me,
I like the statement it makes
I agree with shooting in the early and late evening civil twilight. not an easy task but well worth the effort
Great pic
In fact I knew the clutter would be a problem when shooting this image. If the camera could be lower a little bit, or moved backwards, the clutter might have been out of sight. I didn't try. This was one of the last images before I packed up. It was high wind, cold, and dark. My friend seemed not want to hang on for a bit longer. I thought I could remove that in PS.
Anyway, it is always easier and better if the composition flaw is fixed in the field.
The colors are gorgeous and the tree near - perfect. The composition is solid, but will echo the other comments about the distracting elements on the right. Either a careful clone, or a crop. I actually think cropping in from the right to center the tree would also be a very strong composition. It breaks the "rule" of not centering, but what makes it work is the color gradient;pinks, purple to the left, blues to the right.
And to return? If this is local to you, by all means, return again and again; each season and catching during unique clouds, lighting or weather events. this could be the gift that keeps on giving... ;-)
Lon
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