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Monsoon Light
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Monsoon Light

by Dave Dillemuth

Gallery: LandscapePosted October 7, 20173,436 views17 comments
The monsoon flows were in full force this past summer in the Sierra and I was able to get good conditions on several backpacking trips. I'm in the process of sending files for proof prints so appreciate any thoughts on how to improve. 

>>> Best Viewed on a Black Background  >>> 

5DSR, 16-35 f/4 IS L, .75 GND, double raw processed to retain detail in the sky.
 

Comments

17 comments
Comment posted by Dan Kearl on October 7, 2017 at 10:47 PM
Excellent view and light.
The pink (or watermelon snow) is a big plus but is a bit on the purple side for the snow I have seen in the rockies.
Maybe just a bit off the bottom also...
Registered on September 2, 2013, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on October 7, 2017 at 11:29 PM
Another beautiful image, Dave. That cloud came along as though ordered and placed itself in the perfect position between the crags. It's been years since I hiked in country liked that but I do remember that purple fungus(?) that grows in the snow. The light looks a little in the shadows but opens up nicely in the large version to reveal a nice fg. I think the grass on the peninsula beyond the white rock could be opened up a little with some mid tone contrast added. The low angle light on the snow looks great. The clouds look naturally lit. I would drop the cyan/blue in the ulc to match the blue on the right. Or change the clu in the urc. They be similar probably in tone and color. That's all I can think of.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on October 7, 2017 at 11:53 PM
Outstanding Dave.  Everything seems to come together very nicely here.  The processing looks spot on, with the exception of the ulc and Igor has given some suggestions to address that.  It would be a bit extreme, but I might clone the blue sky completely.  This is top notch and will make an awesome print.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Ry Birge on October 8, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Superb photo Dave! Love the composition. My only suggestion is you might have backed out a little bit to give a little bit wider view of the scene, although I do like this crop. Keep up will work!
Registered on September 23, 2017, 118 Posts, 278 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on October 8, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Dave, What a beautiful image this is. An absolutely wonderful scene that you captured in great light and conditions. Like this alot! The only thing I can see that might be worth a try would be as Igor mentioned and try and match the blue in the upper left corner with that of the right. Just a bit lighter maybe. Really nice work on this! 

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on October 8, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Wonderful mix of colors and lines through the image.  My only comment / suggestion is the cloud base looks overly magenta or the transition zone between the colors appears a little unnatural to me.  Maybe targeting the magenta colors with slight tweaks?  I missed some great conditions out there.  Glad you caught them.

Can you say cover photo!!!!!
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on October 8, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Dave,

Outstanding High Sierra landscape image!  Beautifully composed - I like how everything fits together like puzzle pieces; from the delicate summer wildflowers to the power of the peaks and dynamic clouds.  Everything fits beautifully.

I don't have much knowledge or experience in seeing in person any type of fungus or whatever on the summer snow pack, so I can't really comment on the colors of that stuff in the snow.  Only you know what was there or not.  I would agree with Igor on the difference in color/sat of the blue in the opposite upper corners.  In the upper left, a bit electric.  All points minor - I think with a few tweaks this will be more than outstanding!

Lon

 
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on October 8, 2017 at 4:15 PM
Beautiful!!! I agree with the suggestions to match the ulc to the urc. To my eye, the left corner does not match the scene. Otherwise, it looks great!
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Shirley Freeman on October 8, 2017 at 4:48 PM
What a beautiful scene, and it does look like a cover photo, Dave! 
Registered on May 27, 2017, 77 Posts, 844 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on October 8, 2017 at 10:25 PM
This is a beauty, Dave. The large version does a wonderful job of showcasing all of the beautiful details in this alpine scene. Everything works hand in hand in this image from the FG grasses and flowers to the BG peaks with their snow; all topped of with that drama laden sky. My only suggestion would be the already mentioned matching of the blue sly in the upper corners. I could also see this working with a crop of the blue sky. Just a thought.

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Mattia Oliviero on October 9, 2017 at 4:17 AM
Such a beautiful mountain scene, Dave. You did a great job managing the different luminosity. Agreed with all the previous comments and I would add to darken a little bit the peaks since they look too bright given the direction of the light. Great Job!
Registered on August 24, 2016, 43 Posts, 254 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on October 9, 2017 at 10:29 AM
A lovely image, and so peaceful.  Love the subtle color in the snow and the more intense color in the sky and reflection.  Very pleasing image, Dave.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on October 9, 2017 at 12:36 PM
You've got some great drama here, Dave.  The towering clouds, the rugged peaks, the golden light and the fine green foreground come together very well.  It's a beauty.  I do wonder how a subtle dodging of the green peninsula in the mid-ground would look.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on October 9, 2017 at 9:15 PM
The brighter grass in the extreme LRC and bottom edge seems to catch my eye, so maybe darken it or make a tiny crop. Others have pointed out the different sky colors in the ULC and URC.  The image makes me want to smell that watermelon snow.
Registered on April 1, 2010, 196 Posts, 1592 Comments
Comment posted by Rudy Ruberti on October 9, 2017 at 11:34 PM
It must have been awesome standing there with these conditions.  Love the pink algae and it's nice to see so much snow.  This is a great image of the Sierra high county at its finest.    
Registered on October 28, 2008, 179 Posts, 1875 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on October 12, 2017 at 12:58 PM
John Muir did not call the Sierra "The Range of Light" for nothing. This is gorgeous, Dave, and very true to the light I have seen many, many times in the high country.

OK. I have seen the term, "double raw processed" several times, but I do not know what it means, or how to do it. Could you send me an e-mail about this? Thanks!
--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on October 19, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Dave, A wonderful image and a great one for the Editors Pick. It is a wonderful image beautifully captured. Nick
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments