Lasting
by Doug Koepsel
After I returned from the Tetons, i made an evening hike up the Inner Basin Trail on the San Francisco Peaks near Flagstaff to catch the last of the aspen leaves. I have made a few subsequent tweaks to levels, brightness and contrast after posting this on facebook. Do you have other suggestions for improvement? Thanks.
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14 commentsthe right upper corner can be edited out, it is a bit distracting. Overall it's a great picture!
Love this autumn aspen scene. The clean whites of the trunk are something we get too much of in the Eastern Sierra, it seems most are of the greenish/yellow tints, but alas. Love having the mass of trunks compress so it really becomes a wall, or a veil of aspen. Very cool.
Couple of thoughts. I do think there is a crop up top that just eliminates the very small grouping of leaves on the top left edge. You're still going to be cropping in to the main cluster, so that doesn't change (would love to have all 3 clusters, free and clear... but who knows what lurked above. A slight crop would help mitigate things on the top right as well, although I'm not distracted by that area.
The second though has to do with a bottom crop. First, I'll say and agree with Mark in leaving all the vertical space for the trunks. I love this as presented. The length/height really emphasizes the trees/trunks themselves and in this case the leaves are just an accent, a compliment to the scene. But just for fun, an alternate might be to crop some off the bottom. What this does is throw the emphasis more back to the leaves, rather than the trunks. Does that make sense? I don't think it would be a better image, but would create a different impression.
Processing looks great! Great color, contrast and sat is spot on.
Lon
Here's a cool Photo Shop trick to do that:
- Open the image in PS
- Create Black White adjustment layer ( the image will appear in grey scale)
- Set the blending mode of that layer to 'Luminosity' (the image will now be in color)
- Adjust the 'Yellow' slider to suit.
I love the textures and the peaceful mood. Nicely done.--P
I like this image as presented. Lighting is subtle and brought out those colors. The top buffer without leaves may enhance the image, but is not essential......................Jim