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Last Light

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted October 30, 20176,849 views9 comments
Thanks again for your comments and suggestions on my previous post.

This one is from the same evening as my earlier rabbit brush and sage image.  This one capture a few minutes earlier of the second day of the trip near the South Tufa area.

The last of daylight on just about any scene is usually the most beautiful.  I liked the glow in the rabbit brush and the light streaking across the frame.

Your thoughts and suggestions of course are always welcome.  The is a 3-image stack for DOF.

Thanks for looking!

Lon
 

Comments

9 comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on October 30, 2017 at 2:22 PM
Beautiful light indeed, Lon. The side lighting has created some lovely details which standout rather nicely in the large version along with some subtle shadows creating some nice depth to this image. Your focus stack looks great. I also like the earth tones in this scene. Did you happen to move to the left and get some images? I ask because I could also see this working without the bush along the left side toward the top. Great stuff either way.

Ed
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on October 30, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Real nice light and high desert scene. I find the top of the image is pulling my attention out of the scene, so I might consider a crop of maybe 1/3 of the space between the top of the top big bush and the top edge. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Jones on October 30, 2017 at 8:59 PM
Oh yeah, this is a great example of the beauty of last light, and how to show off that beauty by finding darker areas to contrast with the warm highlights (and that includes the grasses as well as the larger plants).  Nice use of the power of three, too.
Registered on April 18, 2007, 953 Posts, 6435 Comments
Comment posted by Rudy Ruberti on October 30, 2017 at 10:50 PM
I really like the low-angle light on the vegetation and placement of the brush.  I'm a little on the fence with all the bare earth in the foreground and might consider a crop off the bottom.  These are difficult shots and overall I like this one.  
Registered on October 28, 2008, 179 Posts, 1875 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on November 1, 2017 at 11:10 AM
The light and detail in the large version have a lot to offer.  I enjoy looking over the semi-barren ground surrounding the main elements; kinda reminds me of one of Paul B's shot in that aspect.  As nice as the light and detail are, the composition is leaving me less thrilled, but I really don't have any suggestions to make in better.  The part that doesn't thrill me is the background grasses; they distract me.  I would somehow love for the image to just focus on the main elements and surrounding barren area, perhaps thru a tightly controlled DoF or something, or a combination of DoF and burning.  What was in the area where you were set up?  Perhaps setting up on the far side and looking back to where you were - just grasping at straws.  Anyway, beautiful subject matter and gorgeous light.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on November 1, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Interesting to read the comments. I would try burning in the top layer to redirect viewer to bare earth which is beautiful. I would try that before any cropping.  
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Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on November 1, 2017 at 11:50 PM
Ahh, rabbit brush... imo, one of the more photogenic plants on the planet. This is very beautiful, Lon. Love the warm colors and textures. I think I'm with Igor on doing some light burning of the background to direct the eye. In any case, a lovely image.
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 2, 2017 at 1:01 AM
Thank you for the comments and suggestions on this one. 

Ed, Bill, regarding the comp and the point of view, there are gobs more bushes to the left (in fact this was cropped from the left) and so moving that direction was problematic.  I think Bill I could have backed up.  But what I recall as that the light was fleeting and I moved to this location to quickly grab a comp before the light was lost.

Harley, Igor, Bill and Dave.  I hadn't considered burning the top of the image (or cropping,) but I can see the issue with the very top of the frame. This was already a crop off the top as the tufa and Mono Lake was visible in the original.  I do think a burn or additional crop is a good suggestion; I see that, so thank you.

I was more interested in the light striking the foreground grasses, then the earth itself, but the open area including the ground and light I think are important in the comp.

Thanks all!
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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on November 2, 2017 at 1:05 AM

but the open area including the ground and light I think are important in the comp.


Absolutely right. 

 
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