Fall on the River 2
by Craig Moreau
Here's another photo from a brisk fall morning at a local river. After the sun rose, it started breaking through the clouds and fog and illuminating the trees upriver. This started as a vertical image, but there was way too much river, and the closer rocks were pretty soft, so I cropped it square. Looking forward to any comments and critiques!
5d2, 100-400L @ 285mm
1/13s @ f/11, ISO100
TK luminosity masks
Comments
6 commentsEd
This is wonderful! Although we don't know the original, I think you did well to crop, although I'm guessing you drew the line on the crop based on more rock in the river and adding just a smidge more is problematic? But really, I think you made a great choice on the crop.
What strikes me here is the mix of light and atmosphere. I mean there's a part where the sun is poking through tossing light directly on a patch of trees... yet in the river and beyond there is the foggy mist.
Although I like to make my own images pop just a bit, I think any change in saturation or contrast would change the mood dramatically. I'm really enjoying the muted colors and contrast throughout.
I wouldn't change much, if anything. Rather than cropping ULC, I think just a couple passes of a burn stroke would do the trick.
Well seen and crafted. Love it.
Lon
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
I just think of vignetting the upper left corner a bit, that might help me to concentrate on the main elements. Thanks for sharing this unique expereince!
Peter