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An Old Tree +2rp
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An Old Tree +2rp

by Igor Doncov

Gallery: LandscapePosted December 15, 201710,592 views12 comments
During my walks around Todd Lake I would always pass this tree which I liked. Finally I shot it with my iPhone intending to come back and do it with the big camera. Well, it looks like that may not happen so I'm posting the iPhone image. I was primarily interested in the form of the tree.

Please let me know what you think of this one.

Comments

12 comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on December 15, 2017 at 7:09 PM
The tree has a nice shape, and wonderful tonality and texture. You might consider burning down some of the highlights in the background. This would definitely rate a return trip, Igor.
--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on December 15, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Beautiful lines and shapes in the tree. My thought before reading Preston's comment was the same. The background highlights are pulling me a bit away from the tree, which is the star here.  Works nice with the iPhone, worth a trip with the big camera if you can. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Stephen Stanton on December 16, 2017 at 1:49 PM
Some beautiful flowing lines and tones in the old trunk. I've got to think that shooting it RAW would provide ample opportunity to bring out  some of the  subtle tones of the wood and needles. I know my old Samsung III would not come close to producing an image of this quality. 
Registered on March 1, 2015, 54 Posts, 453 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on December 16, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Wonderful detail and well processed on this old hunk of lumber, Igor......I like it......laugh
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 16, 2017 at 2:23 PM
Igor,

I just love these old, weathered trees.  Makes on think what they have seen and experience for so long. They make me want to get close, feel the texture of the worn old tree.... and also look for interesting shapes, textures and patterns, that I can photograph! :-)

You've captured that well for me, which triggers all those thoughts about why I love trees (mind you, trees usually don't move and they don't argue or talk back.)

I particularly like the short pine needles and the random little sticks around the base.  In fact, this could be cropped to square I think and still portray the same.

Would agree about the highlights in the back; just a little burning to keep the emphasis up front.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Lowe on December 17, 2017 at 3:09 AM
Love this as presented but think I would love it even more with a crop from the top to focus more on the bottom. To me that's where all the great looking stuff is.
Registered on February 11, 2004, 777 Posts, 5252 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on December 17, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Square crop as suggested:
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on December 17, 2017 at 7:09 AM
I did a 2 pass sharpening on the original. The second pass on just the tree.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on December 17, 2017 at 6:35 PM
The repost nailed it for me as it places all the emphasis on the sweet stuff like the weathered look of the tree and the scattering of the pine needles around the base. I think Lon said it very well. Nicely done, Igor.

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Kearl on December 17, 2017 at 8:44 PM
The last repost best for me.
I would erase the tree on the left side.
Registered on September 2, 2013, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on December 20, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Splendid Igor.  For my tastes, the original composition is best, by far.  The sharpening on the last repost looks slightly over sharpened on my monitor.  Somewhere between the original and the last repost would be perfect.  As for the tree on the left, IMHO opinion it actually helps the scene instead of hurts. It's an extra element that fits well but muted enough as to not distract the eye.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on December 20, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thank you for your comments. To be honest I was surprised by the suggestion to crop the tree in half. The image to my mind was about as much about the flowing lines of the tree from top to bottom as anything else. It was the best feature of the image imo. But I made the crop to see what the reaction would be. In general, I would say that people are less enthusiastic with smart phone images. That's not surprising since they are inherently technically weaker.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments