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Gallery: AvianPosted December 16, 2017252 views5 comments
Thanks for your comments.
The repost has better perspective for the bird with more detail in the white areas of the head. I also followed Phil’s suggestion in removing some of the “twiggery” over the heron’s shoulder.
David
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Comment posted by Charles Gangas on December 16, 2017 at 10:03 AM
Nicely composed David. Re-editing the comp works well allowing for a bit more room above the bird's shoulder, and you made a nice adjustment to the white feathers as well.
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Comment posted by John Tobias on December 16, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Good improvments! I do like how it is framed!
Registered on September 12, 2009, 2120 Posts, 6455 Comments
Comment posted by Nate Chappell on December 16, 2017 at 3:10 PM
The natural framing works great here and I think it's a nice improvement from the previous version David.
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Comment posted by David Schoen on December 17, 2017 at 1:43 PM
The corrections you made to the repost have improve this image. I like the natural framing and color.
Registered on November 6, 2006, 1213 Posts, 4587 Comments
Comment posted by Lucy Aron on April 4, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Unusual composition. Only suggestion would be maybe come in closer on the bird so it looks more central to the image.
Registered on February 25, 2011, 189 Posts, 1160 Comments
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