California Dreamin' +rp
by Igor Doncov
Thank you for the comments on the last Alaska image. They were helpful.
My local friends and neighbors respond well to this seascape. Taken between Pescadero and San Gregorio facing north it captures a mood that many of us coasters have grown to like. This is a typical winter day there with a high cloud layer and wind that creates a haze. I'm curious what you think of this.
Canon 6D, 24-105@97mm, f/9, 1/320sec, ISO 100, CPL, tripod
Comments
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There is only one minor technical aspect I wanted to mention: the edges of the cliffs appear a bit oversharpened to my eye and thereby disrupt the overall atmosphere of the image for me - it should be easy to fix if you go along with that.
Thanks for sharing your experience of this moment!
Peter
While I like this a lot to view and enjoy, I don't think I would consider this in the same league as your more artistic images.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Ed
The only suggestion I have would be to reduce the darkness of the tree line(s) on far bluff tops, as well as the darker part of the nearer ridge, at the same height. The darkness right in that small area takes away, I think, from the overall misty and light atmosphere. LOL.. I think we all have our own habits that we haven't bothered to check out of yet and maybe should. ;-) I was just going to mention that I rarely make selections for the exact reason you mention. Well, I guess I don't count TK's Luminosity masks... but I think you know what I mean. In my workflow (please note, does not mean mine is any good, correct, or whatever, so take with grain of salt,) I typically make adjustments on an adjustment layer, whether it's hue/sat, levels/curves, selective color, b&w, etc. etc. - and make the adjustment I want to take care of a specific area. Then I simply mask the changes in or out and then paint them in/out with a soft brush and vary the opacity as needed. Anyway, I like painting rather than hard selections as I feel at least a tiny bit more creative. YMMV.
Love the image.
Lon
I'm not sure which object others were referring to below. There's a tree stump and an overgrown rock. I took a guess and removed the stump.