Bloodvein Milky Way
by Kerry Gordon
Hi Folks, this is my first post on this board and I’m very excited to get a chance to receive some thoughtful feedback as well as offer some (I hope.) This shot was taken last August on a month- long canoe trip with my wife along the remote Bloodvein River, which runs from Northwestern Ontario to Lake Winnipeg in Manitoba.
I have tried to upload this image several times and finally Preston Birdwell tried to guide me through what I needed to do to upload the image successfully. Despite his suggestions (and patience) I cannot seem to upload the image so that it looks other than muddy with considerable loss of clarity and contrast. The result is a fairly flat, lifeless image that defeats what I'm going for. If there is anyone who can suggest how I might get better results I'd be most appreciative.
This was a rather complex shot. I set up my tripod about a half hour after sunset to capture what would become the foreground of the image. At around 11:30 pm I woke up and with the same tripod set up, shot 19 images including 3 black frames of the night sky/Milky Way. In post, I stacked the 19 frames using a program called Starry Landscape Stacker and this reduced the noise considerably. With that as my Milky Way sky I went into Photoshop and blended the stacked night sky image with a couple of the images I had taken for the foreground. Once the blend was complete I did the rest of the post processing in Photoshop using Tony Kuyper’s TKv6 luminosity masking panel.
My biggest concern with this image was trying to get a “plausible” tonal balance between the foreground and the night sky. I would be interested in getting feedback on that and any other issues that folks may have that would help me improve this and future images. Much thanks.
EXIF: The image was captured with a Fujifilm X-T1 using a Rokinon 12mm f/2 lens.
Foreground: 12mm, ISO 400, .6 and 2.1 sec, f/14
Night sky/background: 12mm, ISO 3200, 15 sec., f/2 focused to infinity.
Comments
24 commentsThe large image looks good, It has a true night image feel, not too bright and a nice milky way.
It looks typically noisy for a night photo at iso3200. Not sure why the 19 images?, it looks like what a no moon night looks like to me and one 15 sec. photo exposed right would look like this.
I use Topaz for NR, it does well. There are other plug ins for night photography that work well.
-p
In response to you, Michael, I don't want to appear argumentative. But if this is the best I can do in terms of uploading a fair representation of the images I'm working on, then I'm in the wrong place. How can I hope to get a reasonable critique if the image that you see is not a fair representation? I know I don't have that problem when, for example, I post on 500px.com. There my images come out exactly (or pretty damn close) as they were in Photoshop. The problem there, however, is that posting is pointless since it's all about "likes" rather than meaningful critique. That's why I was so looking forward to posting on this site. I know that it is possible to accurately post this image but, for some reason that I don't understand, it isn't happening here and that is both frustrating and disappointing.
Are you aware that you get better quality images if you click on the above image being displayed or click on the diagonal arrow below the image?
Have you looked at your own image through your browser? The image on your disk. I'm on a MacBookPro where the browers increase the size of images to appear larger on the screen. The result is always less sharp than in Photoshop which matches the pixels accurately.
The tonal balance between land and sky is very good imo. The colors of the land have a very natural cast to them. Imo, that milky way is too bright for a moonless night (or with the moon). I believe that's popular these days but the real night sky doesn't look that bright. Also the individual stars are too large. Perhaps this is due to aggressive sharpening? A 15 sec exposure normally does not result in star distortion. And finally - do you really see stars in water reflections? I can't remember. The dashes in the water (as opposed to dots) is probably due to water movement during the exposure. Personally, I would clone them out but I often see images with them in reflections.
I find a great deal of variety in imagery of nightscapes. Much of the variability are not "mistakes" but intentionally done in a certain way. It's hard to therefore make a comment. I think some photographers try to show the Milky Way as it's shown through a powerful telescope and enhanced to look like a cloud. That's now how it looks to my eye but it's become an almost stylistic choice.
Anyway, I've made some suggestions but really compared to most nightscapes this is really good. I like the tree on the right. The land doesn't have that unrealistic brownish cast that many nightscapes have. Heck, this would be a great landscape composition without the night sky and that's unusual as well.
After reading your comment as well as a few others on the scene I might suggest taking another step overall. This scene is extremely challenging for anyone to photograph, post process, and upload to ones own personal liking.
With that all said why not take a more relaxed approach with a seemingly easier image to complete and upload to see if you've mastered the image mounting process to a final product you feel looks correct. It might be an easier way of finding out what shortcomings are real and what are perceived with regard to the NPN viewing process. Just a thought......
I uploaded your jpg to my website and again compared to what I see on NPN: the images are identical.
You mentioned in your e-mail that you could upload the PSD file to DropBox. I suggest you do that so that those who wish to can compare the posted jpg to the PSD file.
I agree with Paul: Work up an image that is less complex; one made during the day, perhaps, and post it here.
--P
I'm processing largely in Photoshop and I'm using Tony Kuyper's TKv6 panel. I get things where I want it and it looks good to me and I'm ready to upload to NPN.
1. I send my completed image file to my external hard drive as a TIFF
2. I make a duplicate copy converting the original to a PSD file.
3. I open the PSD in Photoshop
4. I flatten it
5. I convert the image from 16 to 8 bit
6. Edit > Convert to Profile > sRGB
7. I take that file and, using the TKv6 panel, use the web sharpening action with 720 pixel as the long side. I repeat that action with 1200 pixel as the long side.
8. I then save both the large and small versions clicking on Save for Web (TKv6 panel). In the dialogue box I check "Embed Color Profile" ( I leave "Convert to sRGB" unchecked since that was done earlier (step 6.)
9. I save both large and small sharpened images as jpegs to my Desk Top.
10. I upload both of those images from my Desk Top to NPN.
Are you seeing something there that I've missed or that I'm doing in error?
First, wonderful image. I think that's a great composition, a step often missed when we concentrate on the Milky Way. That little point of light at the background really draws the eye back nicely. Very nice first post.
On the image difference, be sure you are comparing apples and apples. For example, with these night images even a slight difference in the background can change how they appear; same size, same background, etc. (For example, if you view the image in Photoshop with a black background and on NPN with a dark gray background, they may not appear the same; a white background will always kill an image like this.)
I agree with Paul's idea to upload the same image in a psd format somewhere for comparison. It would be very helpful to know if this is a difference only on your end, or something that everyone sees. There might be clues in the file settings as well.
First off, welcome to NPN! I'm a little tardy here, but always want to welcome new members. It's always a good thing when new folks come in a start contributing right away! We look forward to your images and participation. I was reading initial comments and responses and honestly was getting confused on the responses and/or what the actual issue is/was. Then when I came back to this I re-read your comment above. In a nutshell, sounds like your processing is fine. My only comment might be is that TK's action panel and the web-sharpening action actually do a lot of the steps for you like flattening and I believe even converting to 8bit. When I use the action I do it straight from my master PSD file with all it's layers....
But before going any further, the issue of having the standard 720px image look flat, lifeless and dull compared to the larger view - this has been an issue posting for a long time. It comes and goes as a topic and has never been resolved. Many attribute it to letting the system automatically generate the 720px version from a single large upload; however, I've noted this in many of my own files in years past and I always upload the small and the large view separately, just like what you did.
The point I'm eventually making is that in many cases, It's NOT your fault or something you're doing wrong in uploading! Of course not all images display the same and MOST images we don't observe this display behavior, but there are images that still exhibit this problem. IMHO, continue processing and saving the small and large views as you have been - I don't think you're doing anything wrong and you may be spinning your wheels in fixing something that's not broken on your end.
ANYWAY, I'll close by saying this is a fantastic night-sky image. You've done a great job mitigating noise and the star field and milky way are beautifully captured. The other impressive point is how you handled the light and the landscape. The light levels in the non-sky areas is appropriately dark(er), yet there is nice detail. This is certainly one of the better night images I've seen posted here.
Welcome!
Lon