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Yosemite Portrait #4 (reworked)
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Yosemite Portrait #4 (reworked)

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted February 17, 20071,672 views17 comments
"Afternoon Delight"

First of all, thank you for the comments on the previous images. I had suspected the last one wasn't going to be that strong and not appeal to everyone. Hope you enjoy the upcoming ones. No more granite. :-)

As the story continues.....

I'm hungry and it's time to take care of some logistics. Although there are photographs waiting to be made at all times of the day, every day of the year in Yosemite, mid day is usually when I make a visit to Yosemite Village, perhaps drop in to the Ansel Adams Gallery, or in today's case, secure my lodging at Curry Village.

But it wasn't very long before I felt the urge and needed to get back out there. The location is El Capitan meadow, most famous for where the tourists stop in the spring and summer to watch the climbers on El Capitan. This is also the same place of the "Magnificent Oak" I posted a few weeks ago. The afternoon sun was just beginning to show off from behind Cathedral Peaks, illuminating the meadow and black oaks in sweet, golden light. The scene before me certainly didn't portray the dead of winter, but the signs were there as the ground beneath the dormant winter grasses was frozen.

Of the images in the series, this one is probably the closest to being recognizable as Yosemite. These black oaks have been photographed many times in all seasons. But just because something has been photographed before, doesn't take away from the experience of watching the light put a glow on the scene in front of you. I had to capture it.

4x5, Nikkor 210mm, f/32 1/4s, Provia 100, 81b

Thanks for following... comments welcome.

Lon

Next time: "Blanket of Copper"
Hint: Kent won't like this one.

Comments

17 comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on February 17, 2007 at 11:41 PM
Lon,

I have sat under these trees many times over the years, especially on warm fall eveings after climbing all day.

This is quite peaceful, and serene. I love the soft light. You might consider opening the shadows on the tree trunks just a wee bit, and prehaps sharpening the photo just a tad. This nicely composed.

-PB
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Kent Mearig on February 18, 2007 at 2:22 AM
Lon, the rim-light on the cluster of trees is certainly photo-worthy, and there's a healthy balance between dark and light. Even though I originally thought that the darkness turned me off to this picture, I now think the exposure is working...It's actually something else that's turning me off. The barkless parts of the trees, especially the snag on the central tree, are drawing my attention in a negative way. I can't stop looking at them, and what could you do about it, clone them out? No, I think you'll have to count on the viewers' ability to overlook those "distractions" to engage with the wonderful atmosphere of the place you present.

I'm looking forward to being pleasantly surprised by your next post. So far, it's been fun to follow the story of "a day in the life" that this series has been telling.
Registered on September 4, 2006, 237 Posts, 4748 Comments
Comment posted by John&Patty Benway on February 18, 2007 at 5:04 AM
Lon
I have been looking at this scene for quite a while now. First of all, love the composition. The lighting outlining the dark trunks, works very well for me, and if you were to lighten the trunks you would lose some of the effect. This has a very classic look to it, and I would not change a thing.
Registered on May 12, 2006, 626 Posts, 8700 Comments
Comment posted by Alice Scoggins on February 18, 2007 at 9:31 AM
I have to admit the broken limb is drawing my attention. But the light and composition are making it worthwhile. I wonder if you could darken the broken limb a bit?
Registered on February 21, 2005, 430 Posts, 5959 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Baumbach on February 18, 2007 at 2:06 PM
I'm loving these photos of Yosemite and getting more and more jealous with each one. It's so close yet so far away. This is one of my favorites of the bunch.

- Dan.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 473 Posts, 7980 Comments
Comment posted by Bret Edge on February 18, 2007 at 2:15 PM
Lon: The rim lighting is really nice and the golden grasses are lovely, but the tree trunks are just too dark for my tastes. Just a little more texture in them would bring this up a few notches. Still a wonderful image to study.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 711 Posts, 6363 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on February 18, 2007 at 2:54 PM
Thanks for the comments folks. It's very intriguing to me how we as photographer's view things, pick up on things both as viewers/critics and as the photographer. As a viewer and critic I'm always aware that I'm completely removed from having witnessed the scene, yet we can see things that the photographer may have missed while making the exposure. In this particular case, I was aware of the broken branch, but was more careful to exclude a stake with a bright red flag on it. Did anyone notice the pvc pipe sticking up out of the ground near the right edge? I didn't until I began re-working this.

I cloned-in the detracting broken tree branch. I attempted to brighten the trees, but all I could do is just raise the cloudy/muddy result you get when trying to brighten a shadow. I think mostly from a result of the high-contrast lighting, limited dynamic range, then toss in a flatbed scan, and there's not much I could do(considering my limited PS skills.) In the end, one of the major attractions of this scene for me, was the backlight/sidelighting, the contrast and the warm light on the meadow floor.

Thanks for looking and the valuable comments. I appreciate it.
Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Kent Mearig on February 18, 2007 at 3:17 PM
I just wanted to quickly say that the reworked version is a striking improvement to my eye. Great work!
Registered on September 4, 2006, 237 Posts, 4748 Comments
Comment posted by Dale Williams on February 18, 2007 at 10:05 PM
Lon, I liked the first version quite well but the second one was a nice improvement. Your right about the back and side lighting in this image...it says it all. I love this series. Can't wait to see more!
Registered on November 15, 2006, 69 Posts, 1025 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on February 18, 2007 at 10:25 PM
I thought the original was grand until I saw the re-worked version. The second version almost jumps off the screen at you - wonderfully warm colors and so very peaceful an relaxing. Great image Lon.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on February 19, 2007 at 4:30 AM
Yes, a small but very powerful change puts the 2nd image over the top.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on February 19, 2007 at 8:22 AM
Congrats on the EP Lon - very well deserved!
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Alice Scoggins on February 19, 2007 at 8:38 AM
Wonderful job on the image to begin with, and certainly on the re-work. I didn't see the pipe either, but glad you did! Congrats on the EP! :toast:
Registered on February 21, 2005, 430 Posts, 5959 Comments
Comment posted by renae sandberg on February 19, 2007 at 1:13 PM
Outstanding, congrats on the EP. The only thing that would be more amazing is to see all the detail in this, that I know is there. I love the comp, the reworked on is FANTASTIC. Congrats again. :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
Registered on December 29, 2004, 313 Posts, 2476 Comments
Comment posted by Barb Hansen on February 19, 2007 at 1:21 PM
Congrats Lon .....can't believe I didn't comment earlier. The rework is just outstanding.
Registered on May 16, 2005, 380 Posts, 5157 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Benner on February 22, 2007 at 7:38 AM
Nice tones and balance here - congratulations.
Registered on December 8, 2003, 482 Posts, 1868 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on March 1, 2007 at 8:22 PM
Lon, I missed this EP selection here. I have been in and out of NPN lately for many reasons and just caught this out of the CANP posting. Congratulations on this fine image and being selected for the week the image was posted in. :toast:
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments