Posted by David Bush on September 4, 2006 at 1:47 PM
These new leaves are from the same sumac as the previous image. While I do have a couple of small nites with this image overall I like it. The color and graphic lines make this a nice photo for me. Comments welcome and thanks for looking!
Posted by Bill Dark on September 4, 2006 at 5:47 PM
I like your comp on this one David. The radial pattern leads my eye around the frame, but I think I would like to have seen the tip of the leaf at the bottom. I might have also gone for a little more DOF here too, but this still works pretty well. Thanks for the post!
Posted by David Bush on September 4, 2006 at 7:15 PM
Bill,
I agree with you, same two little nits I have with the image. With a little more time I think I could have done much better.
Posted by Tim Buchanan on September 6, 2006 at 8:57 AM
David - I agree with the Bill's criticism, but still find the picture enjoyable. Thanks for posting!.
Posted by Wayne Rhodus on September 6, 2006 at 12:18 PM
David, you really are dialing in some oof backgrounds on your floral shots lately, well done. I will echo Bill's sentiments on the dof and subject position. Thanks for posting, it's nice to see your work!
Posted by David Bush on September 9, 2006 at 5:02 PM
Tim and Wayne thanks for the comments, even with the two nits I just like looking at this one.
Discussion
5 repliesI agree with you, same two little nits I have with the image. With a little more time I think I could have done much better.