Like the crop idea Alan, like David a bit more of a head turn towards you would have been nice... and perhaps remove the foliage behind the bird if you are so inclined....
Posted by Paul Schröder on October 2, 2006 at 5:38 AM
I'm with Phil. Would remove the foliage at the left. Crop idea is great.
These little chaps seemed to have become a popular subject recently, and shots like this show why they deserve to have our lens's trained on them more often
Alan
Posted by Alan Bryant on October 2, 2006 at 3:28 PM
Hello everyone .And thanks for the comments
Took up the sugestion of taking out the left foliage.Does this look better ?.
Nice image Alan, I like the pano treatment. I actually like the first best as I think the foliage 'anchors' the left side, having said that its something that needed trying
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6 repliesHere's a Sparrow enjoying the rays from the setting sun
I went for the longer crop again, to help balance the branch he's sat on.
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Seems well suited to the long crop.
These little chaps seemed to have become a popular subject recently, and shots like this show why they deserve to have our lens's trained on them more often
Alan
Took up the sugestion of taking out the left foliage.Does this look better ?.
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Terry