Posted by Jeremy Cram on October 17, 2006 at 12:31 AM
This from my trip to the Alvord Desert with Zach earlier this summer. I don't do alot of B&W stuff, so my conversions may not be up to par. What do yall think? Thanks for looking.:) Any suggestions appreciated.
Posted by Philip Kuglin on October 17, 2006 at 12:43 AM
Jeremy,
The composition is 2nd to none. The patterns and the leading lines are just awesome. Could you make the FG/MG have more contrast. I am looking on a 21" Samsung LCD which I find much more wanting than the other monitor's I have so maybe I should walk into my office :)
Posted by Eric Hahl on October 17, 2006 at 9:54 AM
Cool shot! My only suggestion would be to burn in the foreground some or more contrast like Phil said. Just a little though.
Posted by Curtis Knight on October 17, 2006 at 10:11 AM
wow, it don't get any better than this Jeremy!
Posted by eric lee on October 17, 2006 at 11:13 AM
In plain & simple English......I love it
Posted by John Lehmkuhl on October 17, 2006 at 11:19 AM
Really sweet shot. I could use just a tad more contrast in FG like Phil mentioned.... the contrast in the BG is perfect. I'd also suggest looking at the top Right part of the sky - it's really dark compared to the rest of the sky....
Posted by Mike Dawson on October 17, 2006 at 12:30 PM
Wonderful comp, just as others have ssid a bit more foreground contrast or dodging and you have a masterpeice
Posted by Sean Hyde on October 17, 2006 at 1:15 PM
Sweet B&W Jeremy. What was your workflow to produce the B&W? And, where is the Alvord Desert?
Posted by Jerry Gowins on October 17, 2006 at 9:57 PM
Wow!! Very cool. Agree with the rest about the burning in. Stunning as is though!
Discussion
9 repliesThe composition is 2nd to none. The patterns and the leading lines are just awesome. Could you make the FG/MG have more contrast. I am looking on a 21" Samsung LCD which I find much more wanting than the other monitor's I have so maybe I should walk into my office :)
Jerry