Posted by Graeme Lee on November 15, 2006 at 6:04 PM
Scraping the barrel again. Tried processing this several times and I'm still not convinced. Thought I'd post it anyway so it's not all been a waste of time. I think the key is to shoot in better light from the start. My nits are the DOF and wished the pose was a bit more side-on to get the tail detailed. Should have gone to F8 possibly.Hindsight
Any comments appreciated.
Graeme
techs:
1d2,500/4 is, 1/500th, ISO 320, F6.3, -1 ev, g1325,asb1,s/kick
Posted by Dennis Alden on November 16, 2006 at 3:19 AM
Hi Graeme,
Isn't hindsight a wonderful thing - I have lots of it!!!!
You've already mentioned my only nit - the DOF- but it's still an image I would be pleased to have. On the whole I would rather have this pose witrh the slightly OOF tail than a more side on pose.
Tis very nice, the pose is alert and the DoF doesn't bother me as it is sharp (perhaps a bit oversharpened) where it matters, the light hasn't really done you any favours, you might like to try adding a lavels adjustment layer (just dismiss the levels dialogue when it appears), set the blend mode to screen, then alster the opacity so that the blacks are showing a touch more detail, you can then fill the layer mask with black and paint with a soft brush in white onto the layer mask to bring the detail into the darker areas where it is needed, by using an adjustment layer you are only adding a small amount to the file size but retaining full flexibilty for going back and adjusting it. Hope that made sense?
Posted by Craig Nash on November 16, 2006 at 5:40 AM
I have to say I like it as well and not worried by lack of DoF . I would be happy if I had taken it.
Posted by John Chapman on November 16, 2006 at 5:57 AM
Hi Graeme
you have mentioned the Nits yourself. I feel it is the BG. that lets down the picture it is so dark and the plumage of the Great Tit is also darkish.
Posted by John Gardner on November 16, 2006 at 7:03 AM
The image is fine to me - i think the DOF is ample for the shot and it is sharp from beak to eye which is where it counts. It is a little dark but I found that it is easily remedied in PS using levels and is fine.
John
Posted by Helge Sorensen on November 16, 2006 at 11:02 AM
Hi Graeme, I'm with the others, - the DOF is fine here, don't complain All in all a nice photo
Posted by David Kjaer on November 16, 2006 at 12:14 PM
Hi Graeme
Nice image - but as has already been said a bit on the dark side!
David
Posted by John Swift on November 17, 2006 at 8:50 AM
I think a little fill flash is the answer here and I'd say the great thing about hindsight is that it is often a fundamental part of learning. Without hindsight you make the same mistakes over and over.
Discussion
8 repliesAny comments appreciated.
Graeme
techs:
1d2,500/4 is, 1/500th, ISO 320, F6.3, -1 ev, g1325,asb1,s/kick
Isn't hindsight a wonderful thing - I have lots of it!!!!
You've already mentioned my only nit - the DOF- but it's still an image I would be pleased to have. On the whole I would rather have this pose witrh the slightly OOF tail than a more side on pose.
dennis
you have mentioned the Nits yourself. I feel it is the BG. that lets down the picture it is so dark and the plumage of the Great Tit is also darkish.
John
Nice image - but as has already been said a bit on the dark side!
David
Regards
JohnS