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Dawn on the Lewis River

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Posted by Darren White on November 26, 2006 at 1:32 AM
Dawn on the Lewis River
This Image was taken this morning around 7:15am
Still pretty dark out but I liked the fog and the flow of the river...

Comments and critiques please as this is an area I am close to and like to photograph..

Thanks
Darren
Posted by Tomas Kaspar on November 26, 2006 at 10:37 AM
The image has nice piunch to ti, but really dislike that frame :frown:
Posted by Doyle Thomas on November 26, 2006 at 12:19 PM
I agree, lose the frame
Posted by Darren White on November 26, 2006 at 1:32 PM
do ya think its better like this

Posted by Lee Newman on November 26, 2006 at 2:04 PM
Hi Darren,

I like it as well (didn't dig the frame, though). The mist is cool, makes you want to see around the corner - drawing you into the photo. Nice work.

Lee
Posted by Mark Hudon on November 26, 2006 at 3:17 PM
Oh, yeah, no frame, really sweet. I'd go for just a hair more space above and left of the building though. If you mat this, you'll loose an eighth inch on both edges and you'll be quite tight.
Posted by Doyle Thomas on November 26, 2006 at 9:42 PM
The fog and the rock looks a little red to me, how do the numbers look? Maybe de-sat the reds/magentas a bit... Better without the internal frame distorting the edges.
Posted by eric lee on November 27, 2006 at 11:12 AM
IMHO & all...I would crop some off the bottom, I find the final swoosh of water at the bottom distracting &c.....but neat comp, you've got a neat misty feeling to this image, and the small tree at the top of the right bank of the river is intriguing. Passes the CMT (Crappy Monitor Test) too. Nice work.
Posted by Swami on November 27, 2006 at 2:26 PM
A nice moody image.

This is another scene where I would have been tempted to compress the dynamic range by combining a few exposures.
Posted by Rick Lamb on November 27, 2006 at 7:09 PM
I'm ALL OVER THIS without the frame effect!! Mark is right about the matting so keep that in mind standing behind the tripod...

The fog is what really makes this work for me!! Well done!!!
Posted by Darren White on November 27, 2006 at 7:30 PM
thanks for all the comments good and bad.....if the weather works out this weekend Ill be back up there to work it some more....

Swami, as soon as I learn how to blend images I will do that....