Posted by Rick Lundh on February 2, 2007 at 2:46 PM
This scene was nice in person, but I'm not sure I fully converted the feeling to the image. The frosty needles had a blue/green feel, and portions were lit with sunlight from behind moving throughout the scene.
I kinda feel the right portion of major sunlit needles are a bit of a distraction...but I haven't printed it yet. The detail might be nice.
I dont know, how do you folks feel about this one?
Posted by Andy Drumer on February 2, 2007 at 3:01 PM
I think it's quite nice but there isn't enough punch in any one area to create a coi for me. I think this may be begging for a close up of the needles, not sure if you walked over and grabbed some close shots... but may look pretty cool.
Posted by Rick Lundh on February 2, 2007 at 3:28 PM
Thanks for the comments. I did grab some closeups which I haven't had time to process yet...and David...you surely guessed it! This was taken along the forest along the freeway just out of Sisters.
I like this immensely, just for the high resolution and the composition, I wouldn't have ever noticed any frost. Looks kind of like a Jirka.....at least on my monitor at work.....
Posted by Jim Jirka on February 2, 2007 at 5:09 PM
Well I guess now you have the kiss of death from eric.
Wonderful palette of colors. Web size presentation is probably the wrong place to view this. I would try to tone down the bright area, or even crop it away.
Posted by Mark Hudon on February 2, 2007 at 5:31 PM
Rick, did you use the blur/overlay layer technique I described in a previous post on this one?
I really like it but the brightness on the right makes it feel unbalanced. How about darkening that and brightening the middle left a bit?
Posted by Rick Lundh on February 2, 2007 at 5:47 PM
Thanks again for the comments...I will play with it more this weekend...and will balance the scene out more...and repost.
I blurred only the brushy portion of the ground on this...and only a little bit at that.
Posted by John Lehmkuhl on February 2, 2007 at 8:28 PM
Kind of has that dredded "HDR" look to it where there isn't any contrast to the scene.... I also agree with losing or toning down the Right side..... BTW, I went "Square" with the web browser window and liked it a lot more !!
Posted by Marc Adamus on February 3, 2007 at 1:14 AM
Rick, this is a really nice one. It needs better contrasts though IMO. The comp. works well for me either square or as-is.
Gorgeous, painterly look and feel for a straight shot. It's gorgeous, Rick. What about a square crop (off the right) just the teeniest bit to the left of the most golden tree?
Oooo, really nice.
Posted by Rick Lundh on February 3, 2007 at 2:58 AM
Well,
I boosted the contrast, cropped it square, and like the end product. Thanks a bunch for the feedback, I appreciate it.
Posted by Marc Adamus on February 3, 2007 at 2:34 PM
Very nice, Rick. I dig it.
Posted by Mark Hudon on February 3, 2007 at 3:40 PM
The second version is a great shot, Rick, I'd be real happy if it was mine.
Posted by Erik Lundh on February 3, 2007 at 4:34 PM
Rick,
I also think think this a good one. Though I don't think the web presentation does it any favors.
Posted by John Lehmkuhl on February 3, 2007 at 4:42 PM
More Betta
Posted by John Zinn on February 5, 2007 at 2:25 PM
Rick, the crop you picked is the one I would have chosen but it looks compressed horizontally. I like the subtler colors in the first and think the second has a bit too much contrast and resulting saturation. Great vision - the variations in tone and color are sweet.
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15 repliesI kinda feel the right portion of major sunlit needles are a bit of a distraction...but I haven't printed it yet. The detail might be nice.
I dont know, how do you folks feel about this one?
Wonderful palette of colors. Web size presentation is probably the wrong place to view this. I would try to tone down the bright area, or even crop it away.
I really like it but the brightness on the right makes it feel unbalanced. How about darkening that and brightening the middle left a bit?
I blurred only the brushy portion of the ground on this...and only a little bit at that.
Oooo, really nice.
I boosted the contrast, cropped it square, and like the end product. Thanks a bunch for the feedback, I appreciate it.
I also think think this a good one. Though I don't think the web presentation does it any favors.