Posted by David Kjaer on February 13, 2007 at 7:40 AM
Hi Rob
I think for this image to have really worked with the side/back lighting I feel you needed to isolate the snowdrop even more and expose for the flower alone. As it is there are too many distractions in the image and a little too contrasty!
David
Posted by Larry Corbett on February 13, 2007 at 8:42 AM
I agree with David, he say's it all
Posted by David J Slater on February 13, 2007 at 2:10 PM
Well I quite like it because it looks realistic. Snowdrops are a difficult subject and far too often people isolate a single flower from the group. Snowdrops are a social flower! I also think the exposure is as good as can be (perhaps a bit underexposed?). I don't know what "exposing for the flower alone" means - there is only one correct exposure value for any scene. Anything else is either over or under exposed.
I would have preferred another OOF flower head in the bottom right hand section to balance the one on the left. Other than that it is a very good and different image. Bird Photographers eh? Addicted to boring meaningless backgrounds!
Nice idea and almost there IMO. The shot is a bit contrasty and you need to really control the contrast for it to work - either to tone it down, or to use it more, say by placing the snowdrop petals against the black/dark background - ie separate it more from the other out of focus snowdrops. Moving to your RHS and dropping the camera a bit lower would have put the flower higher, and helped to remove the oof flower in the lower LHS of the shot.
Posted by Rob Fisher on February 14, 2007 at 4:00 PM
Hi,
Thanks for all the comments.
I have tried to tone down the contrast as suggested.
Discussion
5 repliesI went to Martin Mere at the weekend, home to thousands of birds, and photographed snowdrops. Never been one for tradition.
I had to lie in a patch of nettles to take the picture. Good job nobody was around to hear me cursing.
Rob
Canon 20D | 100-400mm F5.6 @ 220mm F5.0 | 1/200 | ISO 100
I think for this image to have really worked with the side/back lighting I feel you needed to isolate the snowdrop even more and expose for the flower alone. As it is there are too many distractions in the image and a little too contrasty!
David
I would have preferred another OOF flower head in the bottom right hand section to balance the one on the left. Other than that it is a very good and different image. Bird Photographers eh? Addicted to boring meaningless backgrounds!
Dave
Forest of Dean, UK
Thanks for all the comments.
I have tried to tone down the contrast as suggested.
Rob