Ooooo, Darren! Maybe you should seriousy get into the flower department. This is great! I love frames full of flowers like this. The detail is good and made more interesting by the selective focus (IMO). The splashes of color amid the white is wonderful. Some of the flowers on the left are ambiguous-- not sharp, not oof enough. Perhaps the image could stand a crop off the left to make the whole image even more striking? Let's see some more.
Hi Darren, I like the overall composition. Contrast-wise, it looks a little dull, perhaps try for a cleaner white for the flowers (either by different lighting conditions or flash, or postprocessing).
Posted by Darren White on March 31, 2007 at 11:50 PM
Swami,
the whites on my screen are very clean and white. I am getting lots of contrast and punch with the redish color in the middle of the bloom.....
I don't see them as very white either, Darren. I see them as sort of cyan/greenish. Here's one I took out at the Deschutes the other day. They look white to me.
Posted by Darren White on April 1, 2007 at 3:21 PM
Mark, thanks for the comparison. I see your flowers much more white then mine but a bit on the yellow side......here is a repost let me know if this looks better...
thanks again!!!
Darren
Posted by Mearle Gates on April 2, 2007 at 12:06 AM
Here is my interpretation, using only LightRoom.
http://www.gototem.com/16619-1.jpg
Discussion
6 repliesISO 200
Tamron 90-300mm @ 110mm
1/125th @ F/5.6
Auto White balance
shot in raw converted to Jpeg
SB 800 TTL BL mode
I am not much into the floral dept but this tree caught my eye and the light was right...
honesty appreciated
Thanks
Darren
the whites on my screen are very clean and white. I am getting lots of contrast and punch with the redish color in the middle of the bloom.....
could be my monitor, could be yours, who knows!!!
thanks for the advice!
thanks again!!!
Darren
http://www.gototem.com/16619-1.jpg