Interesting Mark, what does color add to this image? Have you considered B&W for this one? It might make more of a statement in B&W... Just my opinion of course...
Posted by Sean Bagshaw on April 5, 2007 at 12:17 PM
I love the texture and I think the faded colors add to the sense of deterioration. The composition isn't quite working for me. I wonder what a tighter crop focusing on the cracks and some geometric elements would do?
I think I personally favor the more inclusive crop, as it gives a sense of the deterioration of the building, adding character. I might clone out that sticker on the window so it dosen't compete with the sign.
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I was out one day in January with Ozzy and saw this scene. It was windy and cold, cold, cold.
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