This is an image from last winter, between storms. If you know the area, then you know I was shooting between the transmission lines that scar the Lolo Pass area, limiting images to fairly close shots. Nevertheless, I love that area, and hope to live to a day when the lines are rerouted or simply no longer needed. I rarely convert images to black and white these days, so would appreciate feedback on that topic, as well as any suggestions on composition. In this case, there was almost no color to the image, so it was kind of a default to simply go monochrome.
BTW, this is my second post, and I've heeded comments to re-calibrate my monitor and also employed the cool 2-step sharpening tip for this particular post. I'm learning a lot from this board - thanks for the feedback!
This looks really nice, I love the dark sky and the tonality in the mountain. The layering is nice too, I would like to maybe see a bit more of the tree line, but I like it as is. The sharpening looks perfect. Well done.
Tom, I think the high contrast, deep black B&W works quite well here. I like the way the weighting feels right-handed heavy. This image conveys a lot of emotional pull. I can imagine it printed large and framed in a nice white, double mat with a black frame. I really like the shot a lot. The only critiques I have are that the sharpening for the web brought out the halos around the trees, and the clouds show a lot of noise. Both easily corrected. Absolutely magnificent post.
Wow, what a strong image; very powerful and emotive. The soft feel of the clouds in the middle layer works nicely to accentuate the magnificant mountain peak and the detail in the tree line. The B&W presentation is perfect.
Posted by Ned Fenimore on May 16, 2007 at 11:05 AM
Unbelievable contrast! I've been to that overlook many times before too - hate the power lines! You did really well with this!
Posted by Tomas Kaspar on May 16, 2007 at 11:35 AM
Very cppl contrasty shot. More of a treeline would be a plus, but it works as is very well too.
Bryan, I'll try that cropping suggestion, too, plus experiment with the treeline at the bottom & fixing some of the noise/halo issues, per other comments. Thanks very much for the feedback - very helpful, and much appreciated!
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12 repliesBTW, this is my second post, and I've heeded comments to re-calibrate my monitor and also employed the cool 2-step sharpening tip for this particular post. I'm learning a lot from this board - thanks for the feedback!
Tom
Cheers,
David
Tom
This is impressive, super sharp and far from typical.