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Palouse Sunset

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Posted by Sunil Garg on June 4, 2007 at 9:40 PM
Hello,

This is my first post in this forum after been a silent spectator for a while now. First of all I want to thank everyone for sharing some of your amazing pictures which has been a great source of insiration for me.

I just returned from a trip to Palouse in eastern Washington and wanted to share a sunset pic which I really like. Here is the pic.
http://raindrops.smugmug.com/gallery/2934450#158602225-L-LB

The reasons why I like this pic are:

1. I was finally able to pull off this decent pic after struggling for a couple of sunsets!
2. I now understand the importance of composition without getting overwhelmed by the grand sunset in the background.

However, I know there are so many things that must be wrong in this pic and hence I wanted to get your expert comments so that I can learn and grow my skills.

Other details on this pic:

Camera: Canon 20D
Lense: Canon 70-200 f4L IS
Av, Tv, Exposure mode, ISO: f/11, 0.2s, manual, 100
Filter: Singhray 3 stop ND Grad (hard).

Thanks.

Posted by Zack Schnepf on June 4, 2007 at 9:57 PM
Welcome Sunil, very nice first post. Nice color, and light here. I could make a couple of suggestions, It looks like the grad was pulled down a bit too far and is causing the BG to go a bit too dark IMO. Also, I think if you cropped 20% or so from the bottom you could strengthen the composition.
Posted by Tom Kloster on June 4, 2007 at 10:28 PM
Nice image, Sunil! I agree with Zack's suggestion on cropping and filter placement, but really like the image.

As a fellow newbie, I would suggest checking out Marc Adamus' tips for sharpening: "Sharpening in Photoshop" It's a really helpful technique that has really changed how I approach sharpening for the web.

Tom
Posted by Michael Joubert on June 5, 2007 at 12:16 PM
I echo Zach's comments and think that brightening the middle ground would help to take it to the next level.
Posted by Marc Adamus on June 5, 2007 at 12:20 PM
Man, that's a pretty sweet image. I could go either way with the composition - I like it as-is also. Excellent color processing.
Posted by Sunil Garg on June 5, 2007 at 1:57 PM
Thanks everyone for your kind comments. Tom, thanks for sharing the link on sharpening tips. That definitely has some interesting techniques.
Posted by Rick Lundh on June 6, 2007 at 12:47 AM
Third the crop sugges...