The emphasis on the clouds in the second one is better, but to me there is too much lake taking up the bottom of the picture. I'd crop right below the reflection of the summit to give it just a little more of a landscape feel.
Posted by Zack Schnepf on July 30, 2007 at 10:25 PM
Here is a crop incorporating both Darren and Bryan's suggestions.
Posted by Tom Kloster on July 30, 2007 at 10:48 PM
Looks great as edited, Zack. Glad you didn't take more off the bottom - I like the vague reflection in the lake. This is bordering on an abstract - really nice! Of course, I'm a sucker for cool clouds...
Tom
Posted by AJ Montgomery on July 30, 2007 at 11:02 PM
Wow, very cool. I like all three versions, but improvements as you go down the page. I could see this one being painted by someone good and selling for big $$, of course, you getting credited for the photo and pocketing some dough . . .
Posted by Adrian Klein on July 30, 2007 at 11:12 PM
That 3rd one is great to me Zack. I can't see anything else I would change with it. Nice sweeping cloud image!
Posted by Mike Dawson on July 31, 2007 at 12:01 AM
Wow, very cool. I like all three versions, but improvements as you go down the page. I could see this one being painted by someone good and selling for big $$, of course, you getting credited for the photo and pocketing some dough . . .
Posted by Marc Adamus on July 31, 2007 at 10:04 AM
I am of no help, Zack. I like either of the first images a lot.
Posted by Curtis Knight on July 31, 2007 at 10:27 AM
I like the expanse of #1 actually. More atmosphere there. Awesome effect, one of my faves in a while here.
Posted by John Lehmkuhl on August 1, 2007 at 3:17 AM
I love this shot !! I'd actually crop a tad more from the left, Zack... for me it flows better without the dark trees at the edge of the frame. Stunning shot.
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I would leave the right side alone and only crop about another half inch from the left side to get ride of the large dark trees....
Then print it...send it to me...and I will hang it on the wall....
Tom