I have been playing around with this style of "warm" B&W.
I know the tusks look a little to burn out but apart from them dose this work?
All comments welcome please
regards
Kev
Posted by writepic on November 18, 2007 at 7:46 AM
hi kevin,
i think the "colour" works very well, giving the elephant some great texture. i don't think the tusks detract from it too much.
the main problem is the foreground, i think it's far too distracting.
Agree with Mark on the forground element, there may be good reason for it, but I personally would like a touch more room to the front of the elephant... The B/W works well here IMO.
Posted by Paul Everett on November 18, 2007 at 11:16 AM
Nice B&W shot, good tones, not heavy-handed with the contrast. Very reminscent of Martyn Colbeck's beautiful work. My only small nit is that the oof branches in the foreground are a bit distracting.
Well done.
Paul
Posted by Andy Astbury on November 18, 2007 at 12:02 PM
As Paul said - very Martyn Colbeck
Agree with cropping the FG and adding some canvass left - perhaps blurring the BG wouldn't go amiss either as there's too much DoF for me on an image with such a busy background
Posted by LEONROSSOUW on November 19, 2007 at 5:45 PM
Hi Kev
I like the color 2 nice capture I, like it I also would have liked a little more cancas to the Left but over all its Nice. I see to recall my old friend "PANAROTY"
Discussion
5 repliesI have been playing around with this style of "warm" B&W.
I know the tusks look a little to burn out but apart from them dose this work?
All comments welcome please
regards
Kev
i think the "colour" works very well, giving the elephant some great texture. i don't think the tusks detract from it too much.
the main problem is the foreground, i think it's far too distracting.
hope this helps,
mark
Well done.
Paul
Agree with cropping the FG and adding some canvass left - perhaps blurring the BG wouldn't go amiss either as there's too much DoF for me on an image with such a busy background
I like the color 2 nice capture I, like it I also would have liked a little more cancas to the Left but over all its Nice. I see to recall my old friend "PANAROTY"
Warm regards Leon Danger Ranger.