I liked the first one, but I like the tones in the second one better. The Tafoni rock looks nice. I like the composition, too.
where was this taken?
-PB
Posted by Murali Achanta on December 16, 2007 at 3:12 PM
Thanks for the comments Preston!!
Its taken near "pebble beach" on CA-1 by san mateo coast.
-Murali
Posted by Michael Hansen on December 16, 2007 at 9:06 PM
I like the comp, tones and I think I prefer the first one.
Posted by Murali Achanta on December 16, 2007 at 11:08 PM
thanks Michael !!
Posted by Lon Overacker on December 17, 2007 at 1:38 AM
Murali,
The suggestions I was going to make on the first one have come true! I much prefer the second version. The sun rays are much better defined and the "honeycomb" (tafoni) is much better seen. This is excellent. My only suggestion... return here again and again and continue exploring this area - I'd like to get over there myself one of these days - and I'm only an hour away.
Lon
Posted by Richard Wong on December 17, 2007 at 2:00 PM
some barrel distortion on the horizon, but I like the composition and light. All you are missing is the honeybees.
Posted by Harley Goldman on December 17, 2007 at 7:21 PM
I prefer the second one. I like the darker, more dramatic sky and the emphasized beams of light.
Posted by Greg Cope on December 17, 2007 at 8:38 PM
Lovely shot. I like the second as the tones seem to make it pop just a little more. I've tried to photograph those rock formations with little success and I think you did an excellent job here.
I'll also second Lon's advice too: return again and again to explore. I've been visiting the coast a lot over the last few years, trying to time my visits with incoming and outgoing storms, and this beach just seems to attract me over and over again.
Posted by Murali Achanta on December 17, 2007 at 9:43 PM
Thanks Lon, Richard, Harley and Greg !!
Posted by Cory Freeman on December 17, 2007 at 10:37 PM
I really like the forms and textures of the fg rock formation. Tonality wise I think I'd like one between the first and second. Nice work.
Posted by Murali Achanta on December 18, 2007 at 8:31 PM
Thanks Cory !!
Posted by Dan Truong on December 19, 2007 at 3:03 AM
I like the 1st shot, the extra strong contrast works with the B&W to make the geometries stand out.
About the 2nd photo, things that don't work for me is: the honeycomb rock feels underexposed. The jury is still out for me as to which is better: harsh contrast or soft gradients for this rock (once it's brightened up).
The black rocks are not contrasty enough so they loose their texture and become an indistinct black shape.
The sky however turns out much better on the 2nd photo.
Posted by Murali Achanta on December 19, 2007 at 3:11 AM
Thanks Dan, will try something in between the two versions.
Discussion
14 repliesLet me know your valuable comments, also if you have tips on how to enhance those rays in photoshop would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks,Murali
Nikon D70, 18-70mm kit lens @ 33mm, f11, 1/320 ISO200, -2EV .
I liked the first one, but I like the tones in the second one better. The Tafoni rock looks nice. I like the composition, too.
where was this taken?
-PB
Its taken near "pebble beach" on CA-1 by san mateo coast.
-Murali
The suggestions I was going to make on the first one have come true! I much prefer the second version. The sun rays are much better defined and the "honeycomb" (tafoni) is much better seen. This is excellent. My only suggestion... return here again and again and continue exploring this area - I'd like to get over there myself one of these days - and I'm only an hour away.
Lon
I'll also second Lon's advice too: return again and again to explore. I've been visiting the coast a lot over the last few years, trying to time my visits with incoming and outgoing storms, and this beach just seems to attract me over and over again.
About the 2nd photo, things that don't work for me is: the honeycomb rock feels underexposed. The jury is still out for me as to which is better: harsh contrast or soft gradients for this rock (once it's brightened up).
The black rocks are not contrasty enough so they loose their texture and become an indistinct black shape.
The sky however turns out much better on the 2nd photo.