Posted by eric weight on January 6, 2008 at 4:22 PM
Not sure about my composition here. I trimmed the frame so that the bird was on the left looking back into the shot. Does that work OK?
I had hoped to get more frost in the picture, but at least it threw a bit of extra light up at the bird.
400D 100-400 @ 400
iso 800 1/125 f/5.6
minimal cropping for comp,
C&C welcome
Eric
Posted by Alan Bryant on January 6, 2008 at 4:28 PM
Comp is spot on and you have done it right(looking right = have the space on the right).
Love the background colour, the robin is pin charp and a nice light on it too.Shame the criters did not turn his head a touch more to the right....But there is always something...
Best wishes
Frederic
Posted by Andy Astbury on January 7, 2008 at 4:09 AM
Comp looks spot on to me Eric
Posted by Mark Sisson on January 7, 2008 at 4:23 AM
Nice comp - all works well.
Mark
Posted by Andy Shepherd on January 7, 2008 at 5:15 AM
Nice shot Eric , think the overall image works well , really like the BG.
Regards
Andy...
Posted by Danny Green on January 7, 2008 at 5:43 AM
Lovely Shot Eric
Danny
Posted by John Chapman on January 7, 2008 at 6:09 AM
Like the shot Eric, but i think I would just like to lose the OOF stub in the foreground which is just hiding the Robin's foot. That would make it into a Great shot for me
Discussion
8 repliesI had hoped to get more frost in the picture, but at least it threw a bit of extra light up at the bird.
400D 100-400 @ 400
iso 800 1/125 f/5.6
minimal cropping for comp,
C&C welcome
A great shot of my fave bird.Cracking BG aswell.
Love it
Best wishes
Frederic
Mark
Nice shot Eric , think the overall image works well , really like the BG.
Regards
Andy...
Danny
John
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