This is the last one from my oct'07 trip to Yosemite. I promise this is the last one from Yosemite, till my next visit. Thanks for being patient with my dumb pictures and providing valuable feedback.
I got attracted to these low hanging leafs against this strong rock.
This is gorgeous, Murali. Outstanding composition.
Although not really necessary, I'd like to suggest that you try and lighten the background just a hair, so as to create a little more seperation between the tree and the rock on the right size of the frame.
Good work!
Posted by Richard Wong on January 7, 2008 at 5:18 PM
really cool Murali. I would perhaps try to bring some more of the highlight areas out of the dark tree just to give it some outline against the granite. the leaves look perfect.
I like this. Very cool image. I would consider cloning out the horizontal stick at the bottom left center or at least burning it significantly. For some reason it keeps pulling me eye to it. Nice work!
I agree with all the comments, I did work on the areas mentioned, but seem like it needs more work and happy that i am going in the right direction. Let me give it another try. Thanks a lot for the help !!
-Murali
Posted by Cory Freeman on January 8, 2008 at 1:13 AM
What I really like the most is the contrast between the leaves and it's surroundings! Good work!
Beautiful image. Really like the difference in contrasts between the leaves and the rest of the image, and the b&w just seems to make it that much better.
Posted by Lon Overacker on January 9, 2008 at 9:24 PM
Murali,
Wonderful image from Yosemite. I finally posted a comment in ESS and will do again here!
BTW, none of these are "dumb" pictures!!! It's kinda like saying there's no such thing as a stupid question... and it's true.
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9 repliesI got attracted to these low hanging leafs against this strong rock.
Nikon D70, 18-70mm kit lens@70mm, f18, 1/13s, ISO200, cropped to square.
Thanks,
Murali
Although not really necessary, I'd like to suggest that you try and lighten the background just a hair, so as to create a little more seperation between the tree and the rock on the right size of the frame.
Good work!
I agree with all the comments, I did work on the areas mentioned, but seem like it needs more work and happy that i am going in the right direction. Let me give it another try. Thanks a lot for the help !!
-Murali
Wonderful image from Yosemite. I finally posted a comment in ESS and will do again here!
BTW, none of these are "dumb" pictures!!! It's kinda like saying there's no such thing as a stupid question... and it's true.
Lon
Lon