Posted by Andy Astbury on January 30, 2008 at 2:43 PM
Here we go then...........Andy tries proper landscapes with a more conventional lens
When I stepped onto this heather moor on top of the Roaches this afternoon the reservations over me doing landscapes loomed large - it was BLOOMIN' PERISHING and blowing a complete hooley...cor blimey it was most uncomfy
I even had to lean on the tripod for this shot the wind was that gusty
Slight crop all round - Lee mount ring vignettes at <15mm
Curious as to your thoughts so chuck the dog a bone folks
Thanks for looking
Posted by Tim Munsey on January 30, 2008 at 2:59 PM
Hey up Andy good to see your mug to. Seems you have fore and back but not enough middle ground, and what's your focal point that bit of lichen, and is there a lead in? Still like the swirly heather
Hi Andy, your post made me laugh, especially the "cor blimey it was most uncomfy"!
Anyhoo, I like the shot, with the movement of the heather set against the solidity of the rock. The movement in the vegetation just above the rock is, IMO, just too much - it looks a bit too 'smudged'.
I think the shot could do with some more PP to give it a bit more impact - just a little contrast and levels etc. I'd personally be tempted to make those clouds a litle more dark and menacing.
But, overall, a nicely taken landscape!
Posted by Graeme Lee on January 30, 2008 at 4:08 PM
Well I think it's a good image, but you know what I'm like with this landscape mularky!!
Great use of the warp tool
Comp looks great but a little too much movement in those pesky bushes
Posted by Ian Andrews on January 31, 2008 at 3:52 AM
Hi Andy,
You did ask....!
I'd prefer to have seen the viewpoint a tad to the left putting the lichen on the thirds, it's a bit too central for me. I like the movement in the foilage, but why f/22? The Toki 12-24, which I like and own, would only need to have been at f/16 to get the depth, thereby halving the shutter speed and decreasing the amount of movement. The close stuff would still show enough for the effect.
Perhaps a tad more contrast, but IMHO that's a personal thing, some like and some don't.
Otherwise, good effort.
Ian
Posted by Andy Astbury on January 31, 2008 at 4:20 AM
Hi Ian - I stupidly used f22 to get as long an exposure time as I could, I was expecting to get more movement to be honest and I wouldn't usually go below f11.
I see the comp error - must have been suffering from brain-fade brought on the the wind-chill
Looking at it this morning I think I could have done with maybe moving left and up a bit to get more mid ground as Tim alluded to - I'll learn
I was going for the Gloomy look, hence the low contrast, which wasn't perhaps the wisest choice I've ever made either
Thanks for the FB - appreciated
Posted by John Chapman on January 31, 2008 at 7:35 AM
Hi Andy full marks for going on the hill in this kind of weather, but it makes me feel drunk
John
Aberdeen
Posted by Paul Inglis on January 31, 2008 at 7:54 AM
Hi Andy,
Interesting! I think the Lichen is too central for my taste and I probably would have shot this at f/16 or less (My personal preference probably would have been f/8). However, congratulations on braving the severe weather.
Posted by Andy Astbury on February 1, 2008 at 7:01 AM
Paul - as I said above. I was after as long an exposure time as possible to get the movement - using a bigger aperture would have been taking me the wrong way
Discussion
8 repliesWhen I stepped onto this heather moor on top of the Roaches this afternoon the reservations over me doing landscapes loomed large - it was BLOOMIN' PERISHING and blowing a complete hooley...cor blimey it was most uncomfy
I even had to lean on the tripod for this shot the wind was that gusty
Anyway, I hope I'm heading the right way
Techs:
D2Xs
Toky 12-24 f4 @ 12mm
ISO 100
4sec @ f22...(difraction a'plenty
Manual focus - 0.5m hyperfocal method
0.9 + 0.3 Lee ND Grads
WB manual
Slight crop all round - Lee mount ring vignettes at <15mm
Curious as to your thoughts so chuck the dog a bone folks
Thanks for looking
That's MHO.
Tim
Anyhoo, I like the shot, with the movement of the heather set against the solidity of the rock. The movement in the vegetation just above the rock is, IMO, just too much - it looks a bit too 'smudged'.
I think the shot could do with some more PP to give it a bit more impact - just a little contrast and levels etc. I'd personally be tempted to make those clouds a litle more dark and menacing.
But, overall, a nicely taken landscape!
Great use of the warp tool
Comp looks great but a little too much movement in those pesky bushes
You did ask....!
I'd prefer to have seen the viewpoint a tad to the left putting the lichen on the thirds, it's a bit too central for me. I like the movement in the foilage, but why f/22? The Toki 12-24, which I like and own, would only need to have been at f/16 to get the depth, thereby halving the shutter speed and decreasing the amount of movement. The close stuff would still show enough for the effect.
Perhaps a tad more contrast, but IMHO that's a personal thing, some like and some don't.
Otherwise, good effort.
Ian
I see the comp error - must have been suffering from brain-fade brought on the the wind-chill
Looking at it this morning I think I could have done with maybe moving left and up a bit to get more mid ground as Tim alluded to - I'll learn
I was going for the Gloomy look, hence the low contrast, which wasn't perhaps the wisest choice I've ever made either
Thanks for the FB - appreciated
John
Aberdeen
Interesting! I think the Lichen is too central for my taste and I probably would have shot this at f/16 or less (My personal preference probably would have been f/8). However, congratulations on braving the severe weather.