Posted by Cliff Dodge on February 19, 2008 at 12:43 AM
Hi i was just looking for some feedback on this photo. Thank you, I appreciate all the Comments and critiques, Cliff
canon 5d
apert. 5.6
shutterspeed 1/40
Posted by Geoff Shapiro on February 19, 2008 at 9:53 AM
Not much feedback on this one yet, Cliff. I can't imagine why because I think this is terrific. The scene's simplicity is deceiving because when I look at it questions start coming to mind... Where's the boundary between water and sky? ...etc.. I'm assuming this is a b/w rendering? Great choice IMO.
I've seen things like this hanging in modern art galleries. While I'm not a great fan of modern art, this is one example of it that does appeal to me.
BTW, how much artistic license did you takein the post-processing?
Posted by Tom Kloster on February 19, 2008 at 11:38 AM
It's very surreal, Cliff - sort of an M.C. Escher quality, given the lack of foreground or background for depth reference. Only when I saw the ripples in the reflections did I realize what I was looking at. I would agree with Geoff that this falls into the abstract art column!
Posted by David Cobb on February 19, 2008 at 12:24 PM
Simple and zen-like, I enjoy your use of negative space.
David M. Cobb
Posted by Marc Dilley on February 19, 2008 at 1:05 PM
Cliff: I was thinking Zen-like, too, but I get a bit of a disorienting feeling here. The total lack of visual anchors does it, I think. That's not really a negative, just an observation. I don't know if you added a gradient, but the gentle one here is effective.
Posted by Janet Bentley on February 19, 2008 at 1:32 PM
I love the minimalist composition you have here. I'm sure that the pre-compressed frame displayed a clearer waterline on each of the posts and more textural detail in the dark areas. Seeing that subtle definition of the waterline would be an added bonus. I would just love to see the frame in it's original format. Bet it's absolutely stunning.
Posted by Darren White on February 19, 2008 at 9:19 PM
very abstract and gallery like!
Posted by John Williams on February 19, 2008 at 9:57 PM
Minimalist shots like this rarely grab me on an emotional level, but on an intellectual level I do very much respect the technical skills here. Well done.
Posted by Cliff Dodge on February 19, 2008 at 10:38 PM
Hello, i couldnt get high enough to get just a hairline of tree reflection off the top so i did a minor crop on top and bottom to re-center and just one little piece of seaweed i cloned out. Then of course i sharpened for the web with Marc A.s method. Minor red leaf on top of post i desaturated. I drove past this about three times and then thought, well a photo not taken will make me wonder what i could have gotten, good or bad, can always eighty six it later, like i do alot even if i thought i got a good pic. :) Cliff
Posted by Mark Hudon on February 19, 2008 at 11:11 PM
I like it but I wish there was more of it.
Posted by John Lehmkuhl on February 20, 2008 at 1:55 AM
I really like this... these types of shots appeal to me. Was this out in the Columbia River somewhere ?? There are some pilings out there I wish to visit one of these days..... well done
Discussion
12 repliescanon 5d
apert. 5.6
shutterspeed 1/40
I've seen things like this hanging in modern art galleries. While I'm not a great fan of modern art, this is one example of it that does appeal to me.
BTW, how much artistic license did you takein the post-processing?
David M. Cobb