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Does this work?

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Posted by Magnus Hird on March 26, 2008 at 2:03 PM
Does this work?
Was going to post a grey squirrel for comment, but after seeing Danny's beautiful red, thought I'd save it for a while!

Instead interested in views on whether this works. Just a goose caught napping at the park, crept in close then waited for it to realise I was there and open an eye. Converted to B&W to concentrate on the texture of the feathers, with the eye left in colour as I really liked the blue and yellow focal point (albeit quite central).

Canon EOS 350D, Sigma 80-400mm OS @ 400mm, f5.6 for 1/4000 @ ISO 400 (realise I should perhaps have dropped the ISO a bit?) Processed in PSE4.0

Comments welcome
Posted by Phillip Tomkinson on March 26, 2008 at 3:07 PM
Hi Maguns yes it dose work I have taken the liberty of applying some sharpening by selecting just the white colour (yes I know white isn't colour :wink: ) in photoshop you would go to select the then colour range and select the white this would automatically select any white in the image then apply your given amount of USM I usually use 180/0.9 1 or 2 times depending on how it sharpened up.

Phil.

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Posted by Rob Howard on March 26, 2008 at 3:09 PM
Hi Magnus,

I like the idea, but an image like this needs the eye to be razor sharp, unfortunatly this isn't, at the moment. I would certainly try some more USM and I think that will bring it up. I do like the texture in the feathers and the composition.

Regards

Rob
Posted by Rob Howard on March 26, 2008 at 3:11 PM
Phil you type faster than me :biggrin:
Posted by Mike Smith on March 26, 2008 at 3:13 PM
not only types faster but processes equally fast :wink:
Posted by Paul Inglis on March 26, 2008 at 3:24 PM
Like lightening! :biggrin:

Hi Magnus,

I think the image works great - Phil's version is a vast improvement (wish I could process at that speed! :cool: )

I think Rob has a point though! Images like this the eye must be absolutely tack sharp!

Superb effort and a very nice image!
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Posted by Rene de Heer on March 26, 2008 at 3:53 PM
I also think it works but as said it needs to be pinpoint sharp. Well done!
Rene de Heer
Posted by Major Gilbert on March 26, 2008 at 5:05 PM
Have to say Magnus on a personnel note I dont normally go for this type of image.
However after seeing Philliphs repost I am thinking differently. :toast:

Major.
Posted by Robert Lawrence on March 26, 2008 at 5:20 PM
Personally Magnus I'm with Major on this one. I do think the B/W conversions can work but it seems to me that this particular subject, being almost monochromatic anyway, would probably be better as a colour image. Having said that, I do like the composition.
Posted by Magnus Hird on March 26, 2008 at 6:50 PM
Thanks all for comments, and Phil for extra processing (again)!

I have had a play about with more USM tonight in Photoshop Elements and got some better results - definitely learning :smile:
Posted by John Chapman on March 27, 2008 at 6:12 AM
Hi Magnus it works for me.
John :toast:
Posted by Austin Thomas on March 27, 2008 at 2:29 PM
Hi Magnus,

It works for me. Lots of impact.

Austin
Posted by Helge Sorensen on March 28, 2008 at 4:39 AM
Hi Magnus I like the idea, and Philips repost makes it work pretty neat! :wavey:
Posted by Gary Beers on March 28, 2008 at 5:25 AM
Works for me on the repost
Posted by eric weight on March 29, 2008 at 1:40 AM
I think that is a fine shot, but it only really works once it is dead sharp. well done.
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