Posted by Rylan Schoen on April 20, 2008 at 4:04 AM
but there was some drizzle... This was my first time actually photographing flowers. The slight breeze didnt help much. Lucikly I live just under 30 minutes from the tulips, so hopefully i'll be able to visit again with some nicer weather. Also, what happened? I believe I was the only one there for the sunset tonight.
Posted by John Williams on April 20, 2008 at 12:10 PM
I love the soft colors and dew, but wish the photo was opened up more (it seems very dark overall) and that it was cropped closer on the right.
Posted by Adrian Klein on April 20, 2008 at 1:56 PM
I really like the rain drops Rylan, moisture on flowers is always great to me! However, the comp could use some improvement IMO. John mentioned it about how it may have been cropped. Not sure if you shot other compositions of this piece but I would explore different ones if you can. Plus, lighting it up a bit too.
Posted by John Lehmkuhl on April 20, 2008 at 4:47 PM
I like the comp but agree this is way too dark... it needs some vibrancy !!
Posted by Marc Dilley on April 21, 2008 at 1:59 PM
Rylan: Great idea you have here, and your focus looks spot on. But as the others wrote, additional processing is necessary.
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