It looks a little lacking in contrast. I feel the whites could be a lot brighter and crisper.
Also the birds head and neck looks a little weird, not sure best how to describe it, but it's what I call the 'Rawshooter' look (the software), where the fill-tool has been a little over-done which results in an un-natural lack of contrast.
A cuves adjustment would soon sort it out.
Posted by Dave Cordery on April 21, 2008 at 5:09 PM
Thanks for the advice I will give it a go with the curves.
Hi Dave,
I agree with Justin, a problem of contrast. The whites in this pic should glare
like a dress of a bride but not blow out.
I wish a bit more space at the left side of the pic. The swan is running against a wall.
Greetings
Bertl Menegoni
Innsbruck
Austria
Posted by John Robinson on April 21, 2008 at 5:50 PM
Yes all been said.
Keep at it Dave.
Cheers
John
Posted by Andy Shepherd on April 21, 2008 at 6:02 PM
Nits have been covered Dave , keep em coming.
Andy...
Posted by Paul Inglis on April 22, 2008 at 2:10 AM
Hi Dave,
Nice pose! If this isn't full frame then I'd like more room all around especially on the left for him to move into as I feel it's a wee bit tight! I agree with Justin's comments. Will check back for the repost!
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Dave
Also the birds head and neck looks a little weird, not sure best how to describe it, but it's what I call the 'Rawshooter' look (the software), where the fill-tool has been a little over-done which results in an un-natural lack of contrast.
A cuves adjustment would soon sort it out.
Dave
I agree with Justin, a problem of contrast. The whites in this pic should glare
like a dress of a bride but not blow out.
I wish a bit more space at the left side of the pic. The swan is running against a wall.
Greetings
Bertl Menegoni
Innsbruck
Austria
Keep at it Dave.
Cheers
John
Nits have been covered Dave , keep em coming.
Andy...
Nice pose! If this isn't full frame then I'd like more room all around especially on the left for him to move into as I feel it's a wee bit tight! I agree with Justin's comments. Will check back for the repost!