Posted by John Mumaw on April 26, 2008 at 10:58 PM
This 300 ft. long (+/-), beautifully carved sandstone wall is located a few miles south of Page, AZ and an easy half mile stroll from the highway. It's not in any guidebooks, hence the unoriginal title I bestowed upon it here. The wall faces almost due west, making it a fine place to spend a sunset. Every time I visit this place, I'm always by myself.
Any ideas for improvement greatly appreciated!
Canon 40D w/Sigma 10-22 lens @ 16mm
1/10 sec. @ f18 ISO 100
'Developed' w/ACR & Tony K.s Luminosity Masks
Posted by Todd Caudle on April 26, 2008 at 11:40 PM
Nice shot, John. I think the black fin sticking out of the middle of the frame is a bit of a visual roadblock, but the fact that it shows some detail due to reflected light is a big help. I love the light, comp and clouds.
Posted by John Mumaw on April 27, 2008 at 12:15 AM
Thanks, Todd. I'm leaning that way myself, thinking that a square crop throwing that fin more toward the right of the frame may work.
Posted by Dan Walters on April 27, 2008 at 12:30 PM
Great shot! Love the repost and the light.
Posted by Guy Schmickle on April 27, 2008 at 1:12 PM
I definitely like the square crop better to get that fin off-center. Really nice complimentary sky
Posted by Paul Martin on April 27, 2008 at 3:51 PM
I think the square crop is the way to go -- I really like the texture in the rock, this place looks to have a lot of other potential images as well. Nice image, John!
Thanks for the feedback, folks. Looks like the square crop takes it.
Yes indeed, Paul...this place has lots of potential for unique images.
Posted by Kalin Wilson on April 27, 2008 at 7:59 PM
I like the square version too, but I think I'd like it without the fin or more light on the fin. It draws my eye which conflicts with the leading lines of the waves in the sandstone. I think a wide shot along the waves into that great sky would be sweet.
Posted by Todd Caudle on April 27, 2008 at 9:24 PM
Yeah, the repost looks a lot better! Hard to believe, since the original is pretty darned awesome, too.
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15 repliesAny ideas for improvement greatly appreciated!
Canon 40D w/Sigma 10-22 lens @ 16mm
1/10 sec. @ f18 ISO 100
'Developed' w/ACR & Tony K.s Luminosity Masks
Charles R Kerr
Australia
Charles R Kerr
Yes indeed, Paul...this place has lots of potential for unique images.
No vertical, James....the foreground drops into an uninteresting drainage.