maybe brighten it a little, make it a little less black, maybe that will make it less noticeable.
Posted by Adrian Klein on May 28, 2008 at 11:30 PM
Gotta love that moss, like a nice shag carpet! Looks good Darren except for the black parts on the rock already pointed out. If they were just a little light would be much less glaring compared to the rest of the image.
Posted by Chris Hodney on May 29, 2008 at 12:12 AM
Really cool Darren. I like the color balance work here on the greens and the water as well. Great detail on the moss and rocks too. The only thing that is a little distracting is the top right corner could use a slight burn, but that's probably just my taste. Great job as usual.
Classic comp. As Rick points out, I'm sure you're not the first with an image like this, but you've done it well.
If I had to make a suggestion, it'd be to add a little more space on the right... I wish I could see the stream flow a little more before it leaves the frame.
Much more interesting than a smear of totally white blurry water flow. I'm kinda bored with those... But, having said such a grumpy thing, I know it's so dark in some of these places that the look can hardly be avoided.
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12 repliesThe moss was just incredible as the cool blue water was just the perfect amount coming over these little rocks....
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Darren
If I had to make a suggestion, it'd be to add a little more space on the right... I wish I could see the stream flow a little more before it leaves the frame.
Nice job.
Sean
Much more interesting than a smear of totally white blurry water flow. I'm kinda bored with those... But, having said such a grumpy thing, I know it's so dark in some of these places that the look can hardly be avoided.