It's a good effort. The colours look nice and also I do not mind the DoF. There are only two little nits for me and they are: The leaf that reaches up to the flowers on the left hand side of the image I find a little distracting and also the damage to the leaves makes them look a little untidy, not a lot to be done about it though!!
Othe rthan those as I said good effort.
Regards
Rob
Posted by eric weight on June 12, 2008 at 12:51 AM
I think it would be better without the pale Oof grass stem cutting through the rh leaf and a cleaner specimen would have helped. I like the way you have isolated it from the surrounding veg though and I admire anybody who can take a decent picture of a plant because mine all end up looking like snaps. Eric
A rather tatty example but it's an effective enough shot. The white grass on the right is a bit intrusive. Did you try any shots framing it more to the rhs?
John
Posted by David Clapp on June 13, 2008 at 10:30 AM
Far from tatty, this is what they look like, its the puchella variety of the species and in good shape. A buit more gardening and a lean to the right before the shot would have really helped this image which is pleasing none the less.
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4 repliesi have plenty of similar shots with OOF green foregrounds but i prefered this one
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It's a good effort. The colours look nice and also I do not mind the DoF. There are only two little nits for me and they are: The leaf that reaches up to the flowers on the left hand side of the image I find a little distracting and also the damage to the leaves makes them look a little untidy, not a lot to be done about it though!!
Othe rthan those as I said good effort.
Regards
Rob
John