Deep Creek Sunset

I'm starting to process summer photos ... including some images from two backpacking trips in the Wind River Range, WY. Both trips were centered around the Deep/Temple Lakes area of the southern Winds - a spectacular place.

I'd love to hear some feedback on this image – an image of the outlet stream below Deep Lake. Thanks!

Great shot! Love the composition and subject matter. For the time of day it is though, I would expect to see the whole scene a little darker.

I like this shot. The leading lines from the crack in the rock lead the eye to the unique ridges in the background. I agree with Don, that the image may be a little to light.

I like this too! I agree, this is an exceptional composition. I really like the jagged ridge line along the top. It's also very interesting how there's water run off on the one side but not the other. Looks like a spectacular place indeed! Well seen.

One of my favorite places!

I like the contrast of all the different elements here - wet/dry rocks, crack, water, flowers, nicely lit mountains. But my eye keeps getting drawn to the upper-left. So it feels kinda "heavy" on the left, even though it should be fairly balanced with the strong anchor in the lower-right. I like it, but I guess I'm kinda "on the fence" with this one.

Very intriguing composition here! It has me hypnotized. It almost seems to me that the subject of the image is the composition itself, or I should say the compositional lines. Having been there myself, I know that I wouldn't have the discipline to get so abstract with such a grand setting. I also like the yin yang effect of the wet/dry rocks.

The peaks are the first to catch my eye of course, but the more I look at the lower part, the more I find. I love the sharpness of the rippled water at the bottom, the accent that the lichen patches give to the curve of the dry rock, and especially those subtle warm highlights reflecting in the flowing water. I can stare at this one for quite a while.

I want to echo what Jackson said. The sharpness of the ripples and lichen are what really grab my eye, because of the incredible detail. Then my eye is forced back to the brighter sunlit rocks, and then follow the crack back up. Nice comp. Good to see your post, and can't wait t see more.

Thank for the comments so far. The image IS a bit "off" in certain ways for me as well. Here's an alternative image from a nearby tripod spot, on another evening (a more focused image I feel) ...

Jesse, I think the first image is really nice even though it feels tilted. The second is just stunning!

These are both incredible. I don't get a tilted feeling from the first one, the elements look just right to me. I would guess that if 100 of us forum denizens came across that interesting crack in the rocks, only one would even think to compose such a striking image. And that one is obviously you, Jesse.

The second is strong, too, but the alpenglow almost looks too saturated.

Love the 2nd shot, the shadow area is great and the jagged cleft in the mountain is beautifully positioned, as is the mini waterfall in the foreground. What a gorgeous place to be in for a few days.

Killer foregrounds in both shots. The arrangement in #1 has your signature all over it; great eye. The sky and peaks feel a little pale - maybe the overall brightness that Don mentioned. But an easy adjustment if you're so inclined.

#2 really resonates with me. The water in the foreground is fantastic, and the lead-in to the Spire and East Temple Peak works very well. Better light density in this one as well, imo.

Brings back great memories. I think I passed out in both of these spots during the hike in!

In between these posts, I realize my latest calibration seems to be a bit off. I see the processing issues on another computer. Thanks for the tips!

It was hard not to include these inspiring peaks in my comps, but just as fun were the intimate views ...

(Thanks again Rick and Scott for your inspiration and trail tips.)

Dude...

Both are tremendous, but the 2nd, with Deep Creek so strong, is mind-numbing! Thanks for sharing your unique take on The Winds!

I really like the simplicity of your third offering. I wouldn't mind hanging any of these on my wall! Very nice job!!

Ken

Jesse.... Oh My God!! I have missed out on the party here!! The second is to die for!! My God!!! that foreground is Fantastic work!!!!!! regards, Rajeev.

Jesse.... Oh My God!! I have missed out on the party here!! The second is to die for!! My God!!! that foreground is Fantastic work!!!!!! regards, Rajeev.

Thanks again for the feedback everyone. Someday soon, I WILL post a trip report from my Wind experiences.