Posted by Rand Herman on September 2, 2008 at 9:41 PM
Took this last year in October. Curious as to your opinion of centering the subject (Sneffels) as opposed to rule of thirds, etc. Thanks for your comments.
Posted by Todd Caudle on September 2, 2008 at 9:54 PM
You actually DO seem to have a rule of thirds thing going on here, in a vertical context. I don't see any way to have composed this better, this is excellent.
Posted by Bret Edge on September 2, 2008 at 10:56 PM
I wouldn't change a thing about the composition, Rand. My only suggestion is to darken the sky a little. Not sure how it looked in reality but a darker sky would add a little more impact to an already spectacular image. Excellent work, IMHO.
Posted by John Mumaw on September 2, 2008 at 11:05 PM
I have no qualms at all about the composition.
As noted, a bit more contrast in the skies would really make this 'pop'.
Posted by Mel Ladewig on September 3, 2008 at 12:11 AM
Looking forward to fall myself.
Its a nice image. The rule of thirds is for sissies.
Posted by Mark Stahlke on September 3, 2008 at 12:26 AM
Nice shot. I like the centered mountain in this image. Placing the mountain in the center gives it a feeling of strength and stability.
I'm with Todd. Well, not with Todd - I just agree with him.
By using the rule of thirds the way you did, you placed Mt. Sneffels in the top-center, not the center-center (bullseye - yuck) and did a damn fine job of it. This is a really tremendous shot.
Excellent work!
Posted by Kalin Wilson on September 3, 2008 at 9:29 AM
Bring on the fall! Ditto on the comments, great shot!
Posted by Rick Dunn on September 3, 2008 at 9:45 AM
It's such a strong image, you could easily get away with a wide range of comps. Knowing what's off to the left in terms of scenery, I'd have been inclined to put Sneffels toward the top right and let the sweeping curve of the middle-ground ridge guide the eye to the rest of the scene, but this certainly works very well, too.
t-minus 3 weeks!!
Posted by Don George on September 3, 2008 at 11:27 AM
Great image! Just remember the old saying "Rules are made to be broken".
Posted by Bill Pelzmann on September 3, 2008 at 1:36 PM
One of my favorite views in Colorado. This composition works for me. I don't think following the "rules" would have improved the image.
Posted by Morris McClung on September 3, 2008 at 3:47 PM
'Rules" were made to be broken. (Sometimes) This works for me, too. Of course it is just about everyone's favorite place. That helps. Good job.
Posted by Laurent Baig on September 3, 2008 at 7:39 PM
Yup, this is great
Posted by Jeff Hackett on September 3, 2008 at 8:08 PM
The 'centered' mountain doesn't bother me since it is not a bullseye. I love the slopes and ridgelines heading up toward the mountain. Excellent image Rand.
Posted by Paul Wegemann on September 4, 2008 at 8:23 AM
As the others have said, this is a fine image. I really like it, and now you've got me really stoked for my yearly trip to southern CO.
Posted by Paul Gana on September 4, 2008 at 9:44 AM
that is one sweet az shot
I can't wait either, I guess some trees have already started changing, I haven't noticed, but I definitely am going to look more closely now
Posted by D J Kuklinski on September 4, 2008 at 10:02 PM
Very well done! Great colors and comp is perfect.
Posted by Don Grall on September 4, 2008 at 11:51 PM
The framing is wonderul and the colors are even better. I agree with the darkening of the sky comment.
Posted by Jesse Speer on September 5, 2008 at 2:18 PM
Another ditto on the comments. A wonderful photo that takes advantage of the wonderful mood at the time.
Discussion
18 repliesAs noted, a bit more contrast in the skies would really make this 'pop'.
Its a nice image. The rule of thirds is for sissies.
Cheers,
By using the rule of thirds the way you did, you placed Mt. Sneffels in the top-center, not the center-center (bullseye - yuck) and did a damn fine job of it. This is a really tremendous shot.
Excellent work!
t-minus 3 weeks!!
I can't wait either, I guess some trees have already started changing, I haven't noticed, but I definitely am going to look more closely now