Posted by Chris Jones on October 13, 2008 at 3:35 PM
Another Cyprus shot and trying to explore the environment capture again. The soft all around the bird is all in the origional and come from partially obscuring the shot with a very close rock and the way the background turned out. I did get some clean closer shots as well!
I'm not sure about this one. It doesn't really show the environment and so the subject looks a bit isolated in the frame, but thats just me.
Could definitely pull some more detail out of the head area.
Posted by Dawn Monrose on October 14, 2008 at 6:28 AM
I like it. The background has a lovely painterly feel. The thing that lets it down for me is a lack of eye contact/head turn. The surroundings highlight the bright colours of the bird well though.
Posted by Chris Jones on October 14, 2008 at 3:07 PM
Thank you for all your comments, very much appreciated
Regards Chris
Posted by Magnus Hird on October 16, 2008 at 7:23 AM
I do like the way the OOF FG and BG isolate the bird, other comments covered
Discussion
7 replies1DMkIII
500mm F4.0
x1.4
1/1600th
f8.0
Slight Crop
C&C very welcome
Regards Chris
I can see where you are coming from with these shots,i like what i see.
Nice idea and one small nit is the lack of detail in the dark head area. You should be able to get a bot of that back.
Cheers
John
Drew
Could definitely pull some more detail out of the head area.
Regards Chris