Posted by Paul Gana on December 7, 2008 at 1:39 AM
this is my fourth time to Mayflower Gulch and I still haven't had much luck with photos from the area. but I Do like this Black and White with the quarter moon in it though
Posting here to see what you guys think
Posted by Paul Gana on December 7, 2008 at 1:59 AM
I decided to add this one for a good honest critique.
The clouds thenselves had this golden/yellow glow from the low sun
Posted by Nick Moore on December 7, 2008 at 12:02 PM
Of the 2 images I prefer your B&W one, the diagonals in it work well, and the moon is a nice addition. Two nits though, I would clone the airplane contrail, and I wish the boot trodden path wasn't in the composition; both these isues could be fixed perhaps in PS ;).
Posted by Nick Moore on December 7, 2008 at 6:05 PM
Hey Paul, it's looking like a nice clean image now, nice job with the cloning
Posted by Paul Wegemann on December 7, 2008 at 7:17 PM
Yup, nice job on the cloning. Now you need to work on contrast. The image is way too flat. Bumping up the blacks and a nice steep curve would make this pop. There lots of drama here waiting to come out.
Posted by Paul Gana on December 8, 2008 at 12:53 AM
Discussion
5 repliesPosting here to see what you guys think
The clouds thenselves had this golden/yellow glow from the low sun
phew