Another one with the big lens, this time on a tripod
Cropped about 30% for composition with some poor cloning of twigs and a distracting white streak in the background, biggest problem was shooting when the bird was still due to low shutter speed.
f 5.6
1/125
ISO 800
500 + 1.4
Comments welcome
Ian Hay
Posted by John Robinson on January 6, 2009 at 9:40 AM
Nice shot though with good space around. The pale OOF streak is a bit distracting but no big deal.
JR
Posted by Jeroen Stel on January 6, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Lovely pose and clarity on the Sparrow.
Perhaps a tighter crop would work a little better for this one.
Hi,
much detail here and I like the composition.
Same like John about the BG.
Have fun,
Bertl
Posted by Magnus Hird on January 6, 2009 at 5:24 PM
Lovely subject Ian and the only bit about the BG I find distracting is the twig up its bum Worth a clone job there (and perhaps the bottom right corner at the same time). Otherwise nice shot
This has been a useful picture as I have learnt a great deal about removing distraction from the background. The left hand side still looks odd to me but as know one has picked up on it it must of worked reasonably well
Discussion
8 repliesCropped about 30% for composition with some poor cloning of twigs and a distracting white streak in the background, biggest problem was shooting when the bird was still due to low shutter speed.
f 5.6
1/125
ISO 800
500 + 1.4
Comments welcome
Ian Hay
JR
Perhaps a tighter crop would work a little better for this one.
Greetings,
Jeroen Stel
much detail here and I like the composition.
Same like John about the BG.
Have fun,
Bertl
Is this any better?
Ian Hay
Matt
This has been a useful picture as I have learnt a great deal about removing distraction from the background. The left hand side still looks odd to me but as know one has picked up on it it must of worked reasonably well
Thanks
Ian Hay