I think a graduated grey boarder would work better than the solid black. I wish the stump in the background wasn't there. Other than that, I think it's not too bad.
Joseph, I get what you were trying for, but I think this is still pretty literal. Although there is a nice focal point with the yellow, there is not too much of interest in the frame even with that. Impressionistic would need a little more motion blur, panning, zooming, etc. And subject matter is as important as in any other shot. I encourage you to keep trying!
Thanks everyone for your input, much appreciated. Catherine, you're right, I should have blurred the shot for a more Monet-like feel. Erik, not sure if I can add a gradiated border with my old version of elements, so here's a blurred version without a border.
I like what you were trying for Joe, and would sure keep an eye out for other opportunities. A photo with denser grass, no tree, and zoomed out some (minimizing the flowers a little) would be pretty cool.
Posted by Marc Dilley on March 5, 2009 at 11:20 AM
Second one is best; if the yellow petals weren't blown you would be on to something.
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