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Grey Wagtail

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Posted by Craig Jones on March 25, 2009 at 5:31 AM
Grey Wagtail
Photo of this very nervy/jumpy bird, they move so quickly i was just able to take this photo of this elegant,graceful bird, the BG is not the best but my processing is getting better (i think?):wink: :wink:
All Comments/Advice Welcome

Tech;
D300,600vr
F4,1/500
iso400
PP CS3 :confused: :razz: Full Frame
Thanks For Looking :wink:
Posted by Mark Davies on March 25, 2009 at 5:55 AM
Apart from the waterflowing uphill ( easy fix) this is so much better.Nice one mate .
Posted by John Chapman on March 25, 2009 at 5:58 AM
Hi Craig, nice capture of the Wagtail. On my screen it looks a little bit blue. :toast:
Posted by Craig Jones on March 25, 2009 at 6:03 AM
Mark you where with me and can you remember there was a mini-weir/waterfall to the right of the picture, giving the inpression it's slopping but the bird/land is level, and john it maybe because there's alot of grey in the bird:confused: :confused: thanks for the comments gents :wink:
Posted by PhilH on March 25, 2009 at 6:30 AM
Nice one.... it does give the impression of a slight slant but that is probably down to the angle you were to the bank.. great PoV and there's not too much wrong with the bg... I am picking up that hint of blue that John mentions, mainly in the grey and the (white?) flank on the bird. apart from that minor nit it is a very nice image of this species in typical habitat...

:toast: :wavey: :toast:
Posted by John Robinson on March 25, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Nice pic. Nits already mentioned.
Definately needs a bit of rotating and "de blueing "
Not easy birds to do either..
JohnR
Posted by Dawn Monrose on March 25, 2009 at 8:06 AM
Beautiful shot, I agree with the nits covered so far. The composition is great!

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Posted by Brett Lewis on March 25, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Nice work, but have to agree with nits. Even if the flow is as you describe it's how it is viewed by those who don't know the setting that see it as 'uphill'. However, what really counts is whether or not you are happy with it. If that's the case you've bagged yourself a really nice image and thanks for sharing with us.

Brett :toast: :toast:
Posted by Major Gilbert on March 25, 2009 at 8:54 AM
Echo Bretts comments. :toast:

Major
Posted by Adam Seward on March 25, 2009 at 9:01 AM
I can see the blue cast too, but really like the shot. Nice setting!
Posted by Guy Rogers on March 25, 2009 at 10:42 AM
Hello Craig.

Nice image and a good composition and setting.

For me Im not sure about the blue cast, I just get the feel you have increased the saturation and this as made the greys look blue. Could be wrong though.
I dont mind the slope on the water as the right of the water line is sharp and the left is soft. So this just says to me that the left side of the bank was coming towards you, and this would give the effect of the slope.

:wavey: :wavey: :wavey:
Posted by Liam Pauling on March 25, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Lovely shot, the colours are amazing!
Posted by Mike Smith on March 25, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Mm, unfortunately you have now introduced a red cast on my monitor, the under tail yellow is now orange tinged/crocus yellow instead of lemon yellow.

I think the issue with the original image was your colour saturation was just way too high, just try calming down the saturation and the blue cast referred to should be reduced

Mike
Posted by Andy Astbury on March 26, 2009 at 6:26 AM
Repost looks better to me Craig :wavey:

Only nit for me is that you appear to have added some more sharpening on the repost - it looks a tad over-sharp.
Posted by Craig Jones on March 26, 2009 at 10:37 AM
Thanks for all your kind comments, i agree with them all, so i've made it as level as i can, and toned down the grey/blue :cool: :cool: Thanks for looking :wink:
Posted by Mark sellings on March 27, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Lovely shot - colours work well and you got the tail still! :biggrin:

Mark
Posted by Craig Jones on March 27, 2009 at 7:51 PM
Thanks for all your kind/helpful comment they are very welcome as i am learning,thank you :wink: :wavey:
Posted by eric weight on March 28, 2009 at 4:19 AM
Excellent capture. the first looked over-saturated to me as well and the second better as Andy says, but I wonder if you modified the web jpeg rather than the original? I think it is better to go back at least to the tiff or better still the raw file and re-work that as you will lose quality every time you re-save a jpeg.
As I said the shot itself is very nice, though.
:toast: Eric