Posted by Andy Astbury on April 1, 2009 at 8:16 PM
Looks well executed technically Ian
Slight pity about the OoF ducks and the little promontory - but that's just me and it's only minor
I'd crop the bottom of the frame to remove the more defined ripples in the FG and also the very top of the frame to get rid of what I assume is the far bank - just the very dark bit from the top edge.
It's a very well taken shot, I agree with andy about cropping the top but disagree about the ripples, they add a little something for me, confirm the fact that the bird is over water. It's nice as is though so well done.
Posted by Dawn Monrose on April 2, 2009 at 4:05 AM
Lovely shot, I agree about the cropping suggestion, but I'm not sure about the bottom, as the ripples do give something as Brian says. Beautiful light on the bird and good pose too. Well taken!
Posted by John Chapman on April 2, 2009 at 4:37 AM
Wow this is so good Ian.
Posted by Alan Bryant on April 2, 2009 at 11:03 AM
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Slight pity about the OoF ducks and the little promontory - but that's just me and it's only minor
I'd crop the bottom of the frame to remove the more defined ripples in the FG and also the very top of the frame to get rid of what I assume is the far bank - just the very dark bit from the top edge.
Nice and sharp - the eye stands out nicely
ripples does not disturb.
A very nice flight shot as is for me too.
Barry
Milford Ks
either way its a well executed and timed shot .well done
Lovely flight shot of a Heron with some very nice light.
Would be very happy with this.
Nicely captured flight with the all important light factor.
Major.
Drew
Don't think qualified enough to judge this fine picture but i do like it with the ripples.
,lovely shot.