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Beginnings of a big snowball (w/repost)

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11 replies
Posted by Justin Peterson on April 4, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Shot this last weekend on my hike to Cameron's Cone...I think this may be my favorite from the trip. Any comments/critiques/feedback always welcome...thanks for looking. Larger version can be seen on my flickr account.
Posted by Morris McClung on April 4, 2009 at 12:49 PM
I like the lines and subject. Needs a bunch more contrast imo to make it have the drama you're looking for.
Posted by Don Grall on April 4, 2009 at 1:38 PM
Good eye for spotting this! I like the slight curve to the snowball's path crossing over the shadows, a difficult job to get the right exposure. I think cropping the bottom third off so the snowball is closer to the lower left corner might help the comp.
Posted by Todd Caudle on April 4, 2009 at 1:52 PM
Just more contrast. Whiter whites and blacker blacks would do wonders for this whimsical image.
Posted by John Mumaw on April 4, 2009 at 2:17 PM
What Todd said.
Love the concept, and a great eye for seeing this composition!
Posted by Justin Peterson on April 4, 2009 at 2:57 PM
Thanks everyone for the comments and suggestions. I agree about the contrast and cropping, but this has already been cropped and I'm only working with a 3.2 mp image to begin with. I'll work on it and make a repost...thanks again guys.
Posted by Justin Peterson on April 4, 2009 at 3:06 PM
Alright, here's a redone version...square crop and adjustments to exposure and contrast made. Let me know what you think. Thanks.
Posted by John Mumaw on April 4, 2009 at 3:31 PM
Seems a bit harsh now.
How are you converting to b&w and adjusting contrast?
Posted by Erik Aagaard on April 4, 2009 at 11:28 PM
I like the rectangular composition better - my personal opinion. Great job seeing this image!

I'm not a digital expert - but I've shot a lot of film, and this has the "look" of an underexposed image to me, which limits your flexibility. Again, not being a digital expert, have you tried getting a little more exposure out of the RAW file? Or does your histogram tell you that I'm mistaken?

Erik

Posted by Justin Peterson on April 5, 2009 at 12:37 AM
Erik,

First of all, thanks for the reply. I took this image with my old Canon PowerShot A75 as a JPEG. If I remember correctly, the areas of snow and shadow were not too contrasted, so as far as underexposure I'm not sure. I'll have to look at the original color image.
Posted by Justin Peterson on April 5, 2009 at 12:38 AM
John,

Yeah, it does look a bit harsh? Not sure what to do, but I'll check the exposure again. Thanks for your continued feedback!
Posted by John Mumaw on April 5, 2009 at 8:41 PM
That's why I was wondering how you were converting to b&w and adjusting contrast.
There are nuanced ways to do both and then there are more 'rough' ways. :wink: