I took this last night just at sunset. I love the green just starting to show, and the springtiime sky for sunset. Good shooting days ahead!
Critiques and comments always welcome, and thank you for looking.
Morris
Posted by Todd Caudle on April 15, 2009 at 12:30 AM
Just the right touch of detail in the mid-ground, Morris. This is very, very appealing! The absolute foreground is kind of dark and devoid of detail, so I could almost see doing away with most of it, but leaving just enough to frame those lush greens.
Sure, Todd, and thank you. I pondered a crop, and I guess it will work to just below the green pine on the left, maybe, but not any higher because it might be problematic then? I also feel the dead leaves on the oaks repeat the color in the sky.
It's a manual blend of 2 exposures that were 3 stops apart. I adjusted with curves, levels, added a touch of sat, saved as a tiff. Re-opened, converted to Srgb, and had to start all over again
The expanse of foreground is a bit much, and there are no real lead-in lines, but I couldn't get any higher, and I couldn't get any closer. I did take some pano shots with the oaks eliminated, and I will be working on that to see if I got them to where they will work.
I like the touch of rust coloured leaves in the fg, I don't think it's too dark but you could crop some maybe. The semi green grass is a sure sign of Spring!. Very nicely composed Morris!.
Good eye Morris. I like the images soft greens, rust and blues. The hills are pleasant to look at and the foreground is fine to me.
In terms of comments I find myself getting stuck a bit on the left hand side as my eyes wander around. The pine tree in the foreground is a little too left and the high contrast between the rocky outcroppings and sunset pull the eyes over. I feel a need to step to the viewer's left a couple of steps and see if the composition improved any, but that might not be possible..
Thanks Steven. I actually had to crop a small part off of the left side. There were some bigger pines that intruded in from that side. Stepping left was not an option for me either unfortunately. I had quite a bit of growth all around me limiting my options.
Posted by Kalin Wilson on April 15, 2009 at 11:17 AM
I like it, nice serene feeling. I could see a slight crop from the bottom but the fg works for me. I like the color of the dead leaves. Makes me wish I could get out and shoot!
Posted by Guy Schmickle on April 15, 2009 at 12:20 PM
Very nice, Morris. Just enough light and detail in the foreground. I like your initial crop idea up to the little pine tree in the lower left.
Posted by Todd Caudle on April 15, 2009 at 12:22 PM
You know, it must be my CRT monitor, but I can hardly make out any of those foreground leaves/details you included. With that as the case, I stand corrected.
Nice image and great color, Morris. I can barely make out detail in the FG on my LCD display. I'd recommend cropping some and lightening what you keep.
Lovely image, with very rich colors that draw me in visually. Very subtle reds in the foregrounds really add interest.
Posted by Jack Garrett on April 15, 2009 at 12:46 PM
I like this a lot Morris. Where did you take this shot?
Jack
Posted by Mel Ladewig on April 15, 2009 at 1:26 PM
Very pretty scene Morris.
Quite a difference between Denver and Colorado Springs in the green department right now. Hopefully in a week or two we'll start to turn that corner. The recent moisture should certainly help!
Todd, it's not entirely your monitor, obviously, as the save for web conversion did darken the shot as presented here. The detail is there in the file. I hope it looks better in my dark office tonight.
Jack, I took it on the road from Sedalia up into the foothills. I have wanted a shot from there for years, but always forgot to go there when the conditions were pretty good.
O.k. here goes, another attempt to try to outguess the effects of uploading a shot.
Let me know what you think of the crop.
I like the crop Morris, it now has just enough of the rusty leaves in the fg to frame the rest of the scene. I also like the added brightness to the fg, but I think I prefer the top half a little darker .
Posted by Bob Falcone on April 15, 2009 at 4:22 PM
I like the crop on the second photo, but the sky exposure on the first. In either case, however, it is an outstanding shot.
Discussion
24 repliesCritiques and comments always welcome, and thank you for looking.
Morris
Care to share you exposure/workflow technique?.
It's a manual blend of 2 exposures that were 3 stops apart. I adjusted with curves, levels, added a touch of sat, saved as a tiff. Re-opened, converted to Srgb, and had to start all over again
In terms of comments I find myself getting stuck a bit on the left hand side as my eyes wander around. The pine tree in the foreground is a little too left and the high contrast between the rocky outcroppings and sunset pull the eyes over. I feel a need to step to the viewer's left a couple of steps and see if the composition improved any, but that might not be possible..
Jack
Quite a difference between Denver and Colorado Springs in the green department right now. Hopefully in a week or two we'll start to turn that corner. The recent moisture should certainly help!
Mel-
Jack, I took it on the road from Sedalia up into the foothills. I have wanted a shot from there for years, but always forgot to go there when the conditions were pretty good.
O.k. here goes, another attempt to try to outguess the effects of uploading a shot.
Let me know what you think of the crop.
RichieV
I was going to echo Nick's thoughts but you were too quick!
A lovely scene...you did a fine job in capturing it.