Taken on my trip to Bass Rock last year. The frenzied activity behind a 'chumming' boat has to be seen to be believed. Some of my better shots with birds close to the lens were spoiled by splashes of water on the lens but I liked the formation of the flock on this one.
17mm lens on a cropped sensor.
1/1000 @ f9.5
iso 200
A lovely action shot that could be improved with a crop to make it a bit tighter.
As it is you have a loose triangle of birds smack bang in the top center of the frame that draws the eye away from the main action at the sea. Crop across from where the top of the bottom band of cloud meets the blue sky on the rhs and you will have a much stronger picture.
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7 replies17mm lens on a cropped sensor.
1/1000 @ f9.5
iso 200
Major
This really portrays the feeding frenzy very well.
Congrats!! Bags of energy and the scene is enhanced by your use of the 17 mm. Really like this.
Cheers,
Chris
Great action shot
Bertl
As it is you have a loose triangle of birds smack bang in the top center of the frame that draws the eye away from the main action at the sea. Crop across from where the top of the bottom band of cloud meets the blue sky on the rhs and you will have a much stronger picture.
John