I've been doing some fieldwork in Weld County and I snapped this today while taking a break. What draws me to this image are the competing greens and blues and of course, the dramatic cumulo-building cloud detail. This is a personal example of make-it-work scenario that I often force myself to do occasionally when I have a limited scene to work with. Although it may not be a winner in my book, it is a good lesson in envisioning how effective photographs can be made in an otherwise undesirable location. Not necessarily looking for a critique here, but just sharing with you a lesson I have learned that makes me a more effective photographer.
Shot with a Lumix LX3 handheld ISO 80, f/4.0, 1/640s metered off sky, 16:9 format with slight crop.
I actually like the cooler blue version. The greens and blues pop a little more. And my critique whether you like it or not ( ) is that it is an excellent shot. You did extremely well and show a photographer's eye to compose and capture such a simple but good photo. So there!
I like Morris prefer the bluer version, or perhaps something in between the two!. This is nicely composed, and the clouds work well in capturing the often storm plains. If I were to make one suggestion, it would be to tweak levels/curves a little more, I think the clouds could do with a bit more white to them and more contrast against the blue.
Posted by Rod Chandler on July 23, 2009 at 2:34 PM
I prefer version 2. Agree with Nick on the clouds - levels/curves suggestion.
I vote for version 1; the clouds in 2 seem to have a green cast in the darker areas (could be my monitor) I also would do a little work on the contrast to make the cloud structure stand out a little more. Maybe setting the neutral grey point on part of the cloud, masking out the rest would help. Cool shot though.
Posted by Erik Aagaard on July 23, 2009 at 10:18 PM
Good eye to catch this. A little underexposed, perhaps?
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9 repliesShot with a Lumix LX3 handheld ISO 80, f/4.0, 1/640s metered off sky, 16:9 format with slight crop.
And I appreciate the lesson and example.
It's a good reminder to me to look deeper than I normally do.