The bridge works nicely to lead the eyes into the distant forest. I too noticed a perceived tilt. A very inviting image.
Posted by Lon Overacker on August 15, 2009 at 2:03 PM
Robert,
Nice job including the footbridge in this composition. What I find interesting is the partial inclusion of the giant redwood. In other words, as the viewer I really have no idea how big or how far out of the frame the tree goes, which makes this intriguing I think.
Color and exposure looks good, but I think this is suffering slightly from jpg comression. Otherwise, a very pleasing and inviting scene.
I agree with a cuople of points...The sense of mystery regarding the redwood is intriguing, and the bridge is a nice touch. It also looks like there is a slight CW tilt.
The color and light look very nice. This looks to be a great place for quiet walk. Good job!
-P
Posted by Steve Sieren on August 17, 2009 at 10:59 AM
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5 repliesYour comments/critiques are always welcome.
Dan Ryan
Northern Califronia
Nice job including the footbridge in this composition. What I find interesting is the partial inclusion of the giant redwood. In other words, as the viewer I really have no idea how big or how far out of the frame the tree goes, which makes this intriguing I think.
Color and exposure looks good, but I think this is suffering slightly from jpg comression. Otherwise, a very pleasing and inviting scene.
Lon
I agree with a cuople of points...The sense of mystery regarding the redwood is intriguing, and the bridge is a nice touch. It also looks like there is a slight CW tilt.
The color and light look very nice. This looks to be a great place for quiet walk. Good job!
-P