Well, in general a nice shot, a little messy in a way but more noticeably needing some clockwise rotation.
Good use of DOF and in general a pretty handy image and one just to re-process a tad and you're there.
Drew
Posted by eric weight on September 16, 2009 at 3:19 PM
Nice and sharp with bpth birds looking down the barrel. Very nice, but I would put back what you cropped off and then rotate and re-crop as little as possible. Eric
Posted by Andy Astbury on September 16, 2009 at 4:26 PM
1.92 degrees of clockwise rotation Andy - were the pirates boarding the boat while you were processing
Posted by Danny Green on September 16, 2009 at 5:30 PM
Nit covered Andy but a fine shot none the less.
Danny
Posted by Andy Stunell on September 16, 2009 at 9:53 PM
Thankyou for the comments guys, i will tweek it once im more awake and repost it, Im glad you feel its got potential, for me its the gull on the water looking at the camera that makes the shot.
Andy A, can't blame the pirates on this one Arrrrrghhhhhhhh
Andy
Posted by Andy Stunell on September 17, 2009 at 12:48 AM
here's the shot with the suggested adjustments, i added a touch more saturation and some contrast. Not sure if i've over corrected the horizontal, i tried to line up the grid with the eyes of the gull in the water.
Discussion
6 repliesISO 500
SS 1/600
F/5
400MM F/2.8
1DMKIII
Slight brighten and boost of saturation in Aperture. cropped 15% from top and LHS
As always C&C welcome and appreciated
Kind Regards
Andy
Good use of DOF and in general a pretty handy image and one just to re-process a tad and you're there.
Drew
Danny
Andy A, can't blame the pirates on this one Arrrrrghhhhhhhh
Andy
Kind regards
Andy